An An took the script in the little screenwriter's hand, and then shouted to Jiang Huai'an: "Brother Jiang, bring a bottle of mineral water!" Jiang Huai'an was stunned at this time. I came back to my senses when I heard Anxin's words, and the first thing I saw was some unstable little screenwriters and the script in Anxin's hands!

"The script is here! Don't make it shoddy so quickly!" Jiang Huai'an said as he looked at the little screenwriter.

"No, no, I wrote this script seriously, it's absolutely good, if you don't believe it, you can read it. Hearing this Jiang Huai'an's words, this little screenwriter was a little angry, after all, some people questioned professionalism, of course, although she has also written a lot of vulgar plots, but this time Lin Qingqing's role is written extremely seriously, even if you are rich, you can't insult me!

Looking at the screenwriter's eyes, Jiang Huaian looked at peace of mind and said: "I'll go get mineral water for her, if there is anything unsatisfactory, you can let her revise it, I can invest in this drama if the money is overspent!" When he was talking, he was very domineering, Anxin watched Jiang Huai'an leave, to be honest, now that he has Lin Qingqing's memory, Anxin doesn't want this Lin Qingqing's role to be ruined by himself, and then Anxin began to flip over this script, to be honest, this script has added a lot of drama to the character of Lin Qingqing, especially adding some of Lin Qingqing's life in front of him, no longer getting some experience about Lin Qingqing from other people's mouths, just now he didn't have such great ambition, and then walked step by step to the position of the Holy Maiden of the Demon Sect!

And a lot of plots have been added, which makes the relationship between Lin Qingqing and Chang Xiao not so abrupt! Even this character has become very plump and vivid! But Anxin might have agreed to this script before receiving Lin Qingqing's memory, but now she really doesn't want to agree, because many plots make Anxin unacceptable! Especially the description of Chang Xiao's feelings and this description of Lin Qingqing's superiority, there are some Mary Sue changes, but in Lin Qingqing's memory, none of this is like that, when she didn't become a saint girl back then, she and a group of girls were all saints to be chosen!

Innocence is such a thing! Lin Qingqing has not been there since the moment she became a saint to be chosen! Because innocence cannot be tolerated there, because innocence is the price of growth! Ambition, Lin Qingqing has always had, because she wants to live better, she wants to stand in front of those people, she is better than everyone! And the relationship with Chang Xiao met for the first time because of Chang Xiao's face, that temperament and the kung fu in his hands, and then they met again because of Chang Xiao's help, although without Chang Xiao's help, that demon beast couldn't help Lin Qingqing! The most important third time is to really fall in love with the flesh-and-blood Chang Xiao in the illusion trial of the secret realm!

Anxin only now figured out that Lin Qingqing did not love the ruthless and desireless Chang Xiao, but the flesh-and-blood Chang Xiao in the secret realm of trials! Although he is alone, he is really different! Later, Lin Qingqing's actions were all to make Chang Xiao turn back into that flesh-and-blood man, but it backfired, and in the end she did not succeed in doing this, and finally left the child, she hoped that the child could recover what Chang Xiao had lost! Although Lin Qingqing didn't know whether his plan was successful or not, the plan in the book was also considered successful! After all, Chang Xiao had feelings in the book at the end.

"Anxin, what do you think, is this script okay?" Jiang Huai'an handed the mineral water to the screenwriter, and then handed the water cup in his hand to Anxin and said.

"Look at it, to be honest, I think this script is a bit problematic, one is that Lin Qingqing in this script is a bit of a Mary Sue, and Chang Xiao's writing is a bit broken! After Anxin finished speaking, he obviously felt the disapproval of the little screenwriter, but the little screenwriter didn't say it, in fact, Anxin also quite understood the little screenwriter, this should be the sequelae of writing!

Jiang Huai'an also looked at the script in his hand, and after about a minute, the little screenwriter finally spoke. "Sister An, I admit that you acted very well, but I am a screenwriter, and I am also the author of this one, I think I wrote the most perfect Lin Qingqing!" The little screenwriter bit her lip after speaking, indicating that she was very nervous when she said this!

Anxin didn't get angry, because this has its own ideas for a character, and this script is already very good! But there is also a Lin Qingqing in Anxin's heart, although she is not perfect, although she has a scheming to leak secrets, but she likes that Lin Qingqing, the one who is ambitious and capable, but has always longed for ordinary love! Lin Qingqing's role, you set her to be naïve during the period when she was waiting to be selected as a saint, but in the battles, those naivety slowly wore away, and then gradually had the ambition to climb up, and she wanted to become the leader of the sect when she was slowly taking charge of the church. ”

Anxin's voice was very gentle, which made the little screenwriter unable to get angry, so he could only look at Anxin and nodded, "That's what I think, so where is the difference between the two of us?"

"I think this Lin Qingqing's ambition existed from the beginning, she wanted to climb up when she came to the Demon Sect, climb to the Holy Maiden, climb to the Sect Master, the naivety and simplicity in her heart may have existed, it only existed in the training environment, but in reality, she lost that thing long before entering the Demon Sect! Choosing a Holy Maiden is a very dangerous thing I have seen in your book, fighting every day to guard against this and that, if she had received a boxed lunch like that, let alone truly become the master of a sect!"

Anxin's words made the little screenwriter start to ponder, and then she glanced at Anxin and said: "Doesn't writing like this make the audience sympathize with this character?

"You agree with me! Let's not talk about anything else. Looking at this girl's eyes, she obviously agrees with her point of view, she wants to strike while the iron is hot and let this little screenwriter change the role.

The little screenwriter heard Anxin's words and took a sip of water, and then began to think about the plot in her book and the story in the script, at this time Jiang Huaian finished reading the new script, although he thought the script was good, but he agreed with Anxin's point of view, because he felt that Anxin was right.