218. Chapter 218: Simple Composition

> Tu Xian stayed at Xibao Middle School as long as possible, but in May, he could no longer take a vacation, so he had to go back in a hurry.

He was unhappy because he felt that he had wasted the opportunity, and in one month at Xibao Middle School, Tu Xian completed one and a half papers, and also rubbed a second author in Yang Rui's new paper.

Now that it's gone, most of the second authors will learn from Yao Yue and Wei Zhen.

Tu Xian is quite greedy for this, how can it be said that they are all foreign journals, even if they have the name of a second author, and now when evaluating the title, it is also useful, maybe it is not small.

But he has been away from school for a long time, that is, a state unit like the school allows him to take a month's sick leave, and he doesn't have to take out the sick leave sheet immediately, but it won't work any longer.

After Tu Xian plans to go back, he will find a familiar doctor to give an explanation for recuperation, and by the way, he will reimburse the fare money.

He has a paper published, which is enough to cope with school.

Tu Xian's departure from Xibao Middle School did not affect Yang Rui's work, because Yang Rui had already moved his work center to the college entrance examination.

There are still two months left, and the actual review time is more than a month, not to mention Yang Rui himself, but the students of the Rui group have reached the final sprint stage.

Of course, sprinting doesn't involve all your strength.

On the contrary, sprints are more efficient, and unlimited work is done in a limited amount of time, which is not good news for exams if people are exhausted.

Yang Rui handed over the real yĆ n he was doing to Wei Zhenxue to do, and still asked Yao Yue and Lu Zhi to be practical assistants, and returned to the classroom by himself to give an English composition class to the students in Hongrui's class.

Not only Hongrui's class, but also students from other classes also moved benches to listen to Yang Rui's lectures.

Since the beginning of this year, the score of English in the college entrance examination has increased from 50 points to 100 points, which is a huge increase and a huge crisis.

For the students of the township middle school, it is similar to describe it as bad news.

Not to mention anything else, just like the previous appearance of Xibao Middle School, where is there a serious English teacher.

Even in Xi County, there are no English teachers with professional backgrounds.

In such an environment, students who can learn dumb English are already among the dragons and phoenixes.

Essay questions are naturally the most difficult part of the English test paper, and the English teacher invited by Yang Rui can't speak well, so Yang Rui personally went into battle.

Standing in the center of the podium, Yang Rui asked calmly: "What do you think is the best English composition?"

"The words are beautiful and the language is fluent. Xu Jing replied with the description in the textbook.

Wang Guohua said with a big grin: "The grammar is good. ā€

"There is something to be said about. Li Xuegong raised his head slightly.

Yang Rui smiled and said, "A good English essay is like this, a good English essay is not." ā€

"Why?"

"Because you can't write it. How many students do you think they can write beautiful, fluent, grammatically sound, and meaningful English essays given the current state of affairs in the country?"

The students shook their heads.

Yang Rui knew that there were actually such students. Even in China in the 80s, there were still many students who had received a good English education, but the number was too small to be comparable to the N-level English and TOEFL IELTS students in later generations.

Yang Rui didn't need to talk about this issue in depth, he said on the podium, with his familiar expressions and movements: "What kind of form of English composition should we pursue now, I think the simplest is enough, it is the first level to say clearly and express the meaning clearly, and it is the second level to make no mistakes, and the first level should be subordinated to the second level, do you understand what it means?"

"The first is to make no mistakes. ā€

"That's right, when you encounter the sentence you want and don't know how to answer it, use the simplest one. ā€

"That way the score will be lower. ā€

"If you make a mistake, you must deduct points, a mistake will be deducted, one of your essays, how many mistakes can be deducted? The writing is beautiful, the grammar is smooth, and there are no points in total, even if you don't give up this part, the mistakes are full of mistakes, don't think about taking it. Yang Rui's tone gradually became stern, and then said: "If you can't understand it, then remember a slogan, simple is beautiful, say it all over again......"

"Simplicity is beauty......

Yang Rui quickly ended the lecture and indoctrination, and let the students start to practice writing.

In fact, he has been preparing his students for English essays since a few months ago, and at that time, his main measure was memorization.

The memorization of the new concept English is the first step, and the memorization of some special example sentences is the second step.

Through these methods, more than half of the students in Hongrui's class can reach the English passing line, and most of the remaining students have not memorized them carefully.

Even in the face of the college entrance examination, the continuous recitation is still tiresome, and it is normal for some students to be unable to persevere, or to choose other breakthrough points.

There are seven homework courses in the college entrance examination, and there are only a few people who can review each homework perfectly.

However, in May, the basic review is useless.

Yang Rui: One student by one, they read their essays in class, and then corrected them in class.

This time, he didn't care if the students' language was beautiful or not, he just found the mistakes and marked them with a red pen, and they would deduct many points for it.

Most students will be deducted more than 10 points, which means that they will make more than 10 mistakes in writing an English essay of several hundred words.

This is already better than Yang Rui imagined.

The students in other classes are also taken care of by the teachers, but the native English teacher at Xibao Middle School is slower to correct the essays.

Yang Rui slowly walked to Liu Shan's side.

As a student, Liu Shan studied very hard, and her talent was quite good.

However, she has some intention of pursuing better, and her mistakes are no less than those of other students.

Yang Rui had to specifically explain: "Any sentence that is written incorrectly will not be judged as a good sentence, and the result of your doing so can only be a subtraction, not a plus." ā€

"However, if it's all simple sentences, you'll be deducted points. ā€

"Two points, maybe three, but you can lose seven points less because of it, or do you earn it?"

"You teach us to memorize new concepts in English, can't we use it?"

"If you want to use it, I will use the original sentence for you. Yang Rui didn't say anything with a poor foundation, but directly said the practice, and said: "Modifying the sentences in it will change your sense of language, so the correct way is that you are sure that this sentence is correct, and you use it, otherwise, you don't use it." ā€

"How many points can I get for my essay by doing this?"

"It's about 10 points more than before. "This is a big improvement, 10 points for the college entrance examination, will be entered into two completely different schools.

Liu Shan nodded slightly, and continued to bury her head in writing.

Yang Rui inspected the time of two classes before he finished correcting the essays for all the students, and when he returned to the room, he himself spread out the homework book and wrote English compositions.

If you write too many academic papers, the sense of language in normal essays will change, and Yang Rui doesn't want to deduct points because of this.

Teacher Jing Yulan is still waiting for him in Bei*Beijing.

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