Chapter 115: The Beauty of Both Civil and Military Affairs
"Oh?" Wang Yixuan's eyes were like torches, and it was obvious that he had discovered this small action of his. Pen | fun | pavilion www. biquge。 info is the so-called master of the move, every move is the winner or loser, not to mention that they have been getting along with each other for many years, and the small actions between each other have long been familiar with each other. He knows Wang Yixuan, and Wang Yixuan also understands him.
"You kid, you seem to have guessed what I'm trying to say?"
His heart sank, and he hurriedly shook his head.
"Hahaha!" Wang Yixuan laughed, "You kid, you used to be fast-talking, but now why have you become so bent?" Okay, well, since your kid's eyes are like torches, I won't go around the bend with you! Good writing, boy! ”
"Me?" He couldn't believe his ears, he had been with the big boss for so long, and it was the first time he heard him take the initiative to praise someone, at most, he didn't praise or depreciate, and his merits were equal, even if he really praised it, he first suppressed it and then promoted it, and finally emphasized that victory was not arrogant, defeat was not discouraged, and so on. Therefore, this undisguised compliment really shocked him and widened his eyes.
"What's wrong?" Wang Yixuan narrowed his eyes, "Do you think that you are a little overwhelmed by my affirmation all of a sudden, right?" ”
"Really!" He smiled weakly, "This kind of time-limited composition with such a tight time can often only grasp one point to express, and many things cannot be fully developed......"
"It doesn't make much sense to spread it out like that!" Wang Yixuan interrupted him directly, "Many times, it is the best way to express a meaning clearly in an article. And now, many articles have been talked about for a long time, and they don't know what to say, empty talk and nonsense, and they have no value at all. But on the other hand, your article, whether it is the example you give or the example of your own classmates, clearly expresses the central idea. Moreover, each example implies rhetorical questions and reflections on opinions, showing richness and allowing readers to participate in such discussions and reflections. The most important thing is that if this post is sent, it will definitely trigger different thoughts and discussions of different people, and finally review the care and persistence of human nature, because this is the real positive energy, how good! ”
"Secretary!" He scratched his head a little embarrassedly, "Your rating is too high!" What you just said is incisive and far-reaching, and when I write the article, I may not have thought so deeply and thoroughly! ”
"Alright!" Wang Yixuan leaned on his desk, knocked on the table with his hand, and said with a smile, "Don't be humble here, you kid!" That's it, I'll make another small suggestion, maybe a little nitpicky, you kid see if you can change it. If you can change it, you can change it, and if you can't change it, it will definitely be another hit! ”
"You know what the hit is! It's really trendy! He laughed, but quickly corrected, "You say, if there is anything to change, I'll change it immediately!" ”
Wang Yixuan smiled slightly: "There is nothing special about it, it is still your core ideological issue." In fact, the whole has been buckled very tightly and expressed very clearly, but in the end, it should be refined and refined, and then emphasized. At this point, not enough has been done! ”
Sighing at Wang Yixuan's insight into the world, he couldn't help but nodded, don't say it, this is really a problem, I already felt it when I was writing. In the end, the language is not concise enough, and the central idea should be distilled into one or two classic sentences, so that it is easier to be remembered. At that time, I also wanted to put some effort into carving it, but the time was too tight, so I could only write where it was.
Now it seems that writing articles is the same as being a person and doing things, it is impossible to steal a little lazy, good or bad, fine or not, maybe ordinary people can't see it, but in the eyes of real top masters, it can be found at a glance.
Well! In that case, let's make up for this lesson of trying to do things.
Suddenly, he suddenly remembered that when he was talking to Luo Qing on the phone just now, this "underworld princess" summed up a short paragraph for her own views, although it was basically his original words, but they were connected together, more compact and clear.
Oops! In this way, it seems that the call with the two of them "black and white princesses" is really right, although there is a hint of showmanship, but the feedback they give themselves still plays a great role. I didn't think much of it at the time, but now I can realize it all at once, especially the performance of "Princess Underworld" Luo Qing.
Just ask, who would have thought that such an "ancient girl" who only knew how to fight and kill and dance with guns and sticks since she was a child would get such a leap forward in a short period of time, and what she saw and learned was on par with Lu Qing, who has a deep family history, and even "better".
It seems that this is the natural nature of man. Just think about it, Luo Qing has improved so much in "literature" in just two years, and he dare not say that he has surpassed Lu Qing in an all-round way, and it can even be called "half a catty and eight taels". But in terms of "martial arts", it is much stronger than Lu Qing.
Not to mention Lu Qing, even if he learned a lot of kung fu in Crouching Tiger Town through the guidance of "Ghost Foot Seven" Ah Cake and "Shadowless Hand" Ah Xiang, he is already invincible among ordinary gangsters, but if he compares it with Luo Qing, it is absolutely for nothing.
From this point of view, Luo Qing's "comprehensive first" is already a sure fact. In this case, let's make full use of the achievements of this "all-round talent" who is "the first in all respects."
Thinking of this, he already had a grasp in his heart, and said to Wang Yixuan: "Secretary! What you said is indeed the most important part of my article, on the way here, I thought of such a paragraph, can you see if it is okay? ”
"Oh?" Wang Yixuan was very surprised, "You have already thought about it?" Tell me about it! ”
He smiled and repeated what Luo Qing said, and Wang Yixuan was stunned when he heard it, and said several times in a row, "Okay!" ”
He said it completely from memory, to say that Luo Qing spoke very quickly on the phone at that time, it is impossible for ordinary people to remember it. But he remembered it, firstly, because the article was written by him, so the general content and sentences were very clearly remembered, and secondly, he really put his mind into it at that time, and felt that Luo Qing's words were better than his own summary, so he deliberately paid attention to memorization. As for the third, it is because his memory is indeed different from ordinary people, it can be said that he will never forget, and he really cares about it, and it can be said that he will never forget it.
This is what he says, with his own understanding and slight corrections.
Staying together or leaving is not the only criterion for judging, what really matters is the yearning and persistence of love in the heart. Regardless of whether this persistence is in the end, as long as you persist, even if you have to leave in the end, please smile, do not have any guilt, or have a weak heart for fear of accusation, just raise your head and smile slightly, which is also full of positive energy!
When Wang Yixuan heard him say such a thing immediately, his eyes really widened, and he almost couldn't believe his ears, and it took a long time before he said, "You, you have already thought about how to modify it?" ”
"Yes!" He smiled slightly, "Look, is it okay to refine the most important text into such a paragraph?" ”
"Hmmm! Very good! Wang Yixuan nodded heavily, if there was still some nitpicking just now, then he would definitely appreciate it at this time, "If it is changed to such a paragraph, then the main idea will indeed be clearer!" Good boy, there you have it. After changing this, if this post is sent out immediately, it will definitely surpass yesterday's one! ”
"Thank you for the secretary's affirmation!" He replied, "Actually, I really don't have much luxury. Your encouragement is so powerful, it is exactly the same as what your little sister said, I hope it is really as I wish, and I can surpass the first article yesterday! ”
"Oh?" Wang Yixuan thought thoughtfully, "It turns out that after your kid finished writing it quickly, he sent it to Qing'er." Well, it's no wonder that this paragraph is summed up so well, it turns out that someone is helping! ”
He smiled and nodded, but didn't deny it.
Actually, he did it on purpose.
Wang Yixuan is so smart, of course, he can see that he just said that this revised "Wen Yan" was definitely not made by himself temporarily, and someone must have helped. Therefore, after I took the initiative to tell Lu Qing after writing it, I found such a reason for "Qing'er to help" very clearly. In this way, Wang Yixuan will fully believe it and will no longer suspect Luo Qing.
Sure enough, looking at Wang Yixuan's face again, a rare smile appeared: "You kid is blessed!" With the little sister as your strong backing, the two swords are combined, it must be invincible! ”
He smiled and nodded, and directly used a pen to write out the paragraph that Luo Qing had just recited, word by word, and then showed it to Wang Yixuan.
Wang Yixuan waved his pen, drew a big circle, and said loudly: "Send it!" ”
"Yes!" He replied, "Secretary! There are two more small details that I would like to instruct. First, I want Lao He to add the MV link of singing this song at the end when they help me publish this article. In this way, readers can directly click on the video to play it after reading the post, and compare the Chinese and English lyrics to have a good experience of the song. I was even more impressed by the points expressed in this post! ”
"Hmm!" Wang Yixuan thought for a moment and nodded heavily, "This method is good!" It is not only visual, but also uses the narrative of the current network means, I completely agree, what about the next one? ”
"Yes!" He slowed down his speech, "As for the second, I wonder if I want to let Lu Qing and the Red Guest Goddess rest." For Lu Qing, there is no need to write wonderful replies and auxiliary articles, and Xiaoyu, the goddess of red guests, does not need to use technical means to cheer and cheer for me......"
Before he could finish speaking, Wang Yixuan interrupted him a little anxiously: "The red goddess Xiaoyu you said, it definitely didn't use technical means to increase the number of clicks for you." As we said at the beginning, the sword is not used, it is just hung over the head of the bad guys. Needless to say! And what you said was to let Qing'er help write replies and auxiliary posts, which we originally agreed upon, and it is better to be alone than to bloom with a hundred flowers......"
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