Chapter 963: On Poetry

After listening to Zhang Qian's words, Zhang Zheng said in surprise: "I said Xiaoqian, you are not big, you know a lot, you even know this?" ”

Zhang Qian said: "I haven't eaten pork, haven't you seen a pig run?" In college, we secretly watched small colored movies in some video halls, so we are no strangers to these things. ”

"Okay, let's stop talking about this sensitive topic, I'll walk around with you." Zhang Zheng said.

"Okay, Brother Zhang."

When they entered the hallway, they were immediately fascinated by the historical photographs hanging on the walls on both sides.

"Wow, great leader, have you lived here more than once?" Cui Yingying said.

"Isn't this the president of the country**? There is also the beloved Premier Zhou, who lived on this floor. Sister Yingying, come and see, isn't this your grandfather? Lin Bilian shouted.

"Well, it's really my grandfather. This photo is so precious that we don't even have it in our house, and when I leave, I have to take a picture and take it back with me so that my family can see my grandfather's demeanor. Cui Yingying said excitedly.

"Wow! Ten marshals, six marshals have been here. Ms. Soong Ching Ling has also been here. Luo Min pointed to Song Qingling's large photo and said.

When Zhang Zheng took them to the courtyard, these girls were deeply attracted by the scenery of the south of the Yangtze River in the courtyard.

"Wow! Between this square inch, there is such a pleasant scenery in the south of the Yangtze River, look at the rockery waterfalls, small bridges and flowing water, carved beams and painted buildings, bucket cornices, cedar osmanthus, wooden houses in the forest, red carp in the pond, everywhere can be into the poem, into the painting, it is really worthy of being a well-known time-honored garden-style hotel at home and abroad. Cui Yingying sighed.

"Yingying is right, in the Jibei Hotel, there are not only exquisite and attractive Lu cuisine, but also exquisite and pleasant Jiangnan scenery, more profound history and cultural heritage, come here to taste food, enjoy the beautiful scenery, explore the history, has become the best choice for many dignitaries, public celebrities, and famous artists." Zhang Zheng said.

"Judging from the endless stream of people, the business here is very good, which shows that the unique characteristics and characteristics of the hotel are still very attractive." Cui Yingying said.

When they came to the lobby of the hotel, they saw that many book friends and poets from all over the country had gathered here, and they were commenting on the calligraphy and painting works on the wall.

"For this poem "Song of Beauty", what I appreciate most is the artistic conception of the whole poem, especially this sentence 'Osmanthus is fragrant cedar green, and the fish watchers by the pond lean on the building', reading here, it seems to smell the fragrance of a wisp of osmanthus, which is heartwarming; Its poetry can be described as vivid and stunning. A middle-aged man said.

"This sentence 'the green tile and red wall line in the poem, the small bridge and flowing water in the middle of the painting', is even more wonderful, the green tile and red wall seem to walk in the poem, the small bridge and flowing water seem to swim in the painting, reflecting the poet's meticulous observation of things, reflecting the poet's profound poetic skills." An old man said.

"Although this poem is a rare masterpiece of Yongjing, it also has its shortcomings, except for some deficiencies in Pingxuan, the two 'Jiangnan' in the poem seem to overlap and repeat." A middle-aged woman said.

"Antique poems, in general, can pay attention to the plain, but can not be trapped by it, but the rhythm still has to be exquisite, the rhythm and battle of this poem, in general, is still good. I heard that the poet is a young man in his twenties, and it is quite rare for the poet to reach such a level. The old man said.

"In fact, for ancient style poems or old style poems, the most important thing is to be rhythmic and peaceful, and appropriate repetition is still allowed, specifically for this poem, starting with 'Jiangnan' and ending with 'Jiangnan', I think it's still very good." A young man said.

This aunt is right, whether it is a poem or a word, we should try to avoid meaningless repetition, especially in the old style poems characterized by shortness and conciseness, it is especially important to avoid repetition. Of course, some repetition is necessary, such as: one year old and one withered, one inch of lovesickness and one inch of gray, it is difficult to say goodbye when we meet, being alone in a foreign land as a stranger, loving lonely clouds and loving monks, amorous but always seems to be ruthless, half as a barrier and half as a sail, and so on. Specific to the repetition in this poem, it should be avoided, and I suggest that the second 'Jiangnan' be changed to Gusu, which may be better. Zhang Zheng couldn't help but join the discussion.

"No, the so-called Gusu refers to Suzhou City, Jiangsu, Suzhou is not Jiangnan, so Gusu cannot be used to replace Jiangnan." The middle-aged man said.

"This teacher, I don't quite agree with your point of view, 'Suzhou is not Jiangnan', this sentence is problematic, it should be said that Suzhou is part of Jiangnan." Zhang Zheng raised a different opinion.

"Oh, it's because I'm not strict enough, I appreciate the young man's courage, you don't seem to be finished, please continue." The middle-aged man said.