The book was written for about a year and seven months, with a total of 2.68 million words, which is not a lot of words, but it is not a lot of words.

The results of this book,It's much better than the previous book.,It's not bad for me as a rookie author.,Of course,Because the plot in the middle is a little collapsed.,Plus the back changed from three to two.,The later subscription is not very good.,It's all my personal reasons.,Don't blame anyone.。 (The reason for the collapse of the plot is mainly because I killed Li Shen!!) ）

Since May and June, I feel that this book has reached the end of the period, but because there is no outline, I can only deduce down, and I can't figure out when I can finish it.

The first node is when Li Xin enters the capital, at that time, he can actually finish the book, leaving an open-ended ending, which will be much better than the current ending.

Because according to my original idea, it is best to let Li Xin's son change his surname to be the emperor, so that there will be a step down on both sides, and then after showing this sign, I received a lot of readers' opinions (mainly spraying me), I wavered, and after soliciting the opinions of readers and editors in the group, I also felt that it was not appropriate to deal with it like this, so there was the current ending.

Then let's talk about the character of Li Xin.

In fact, I mentioned at the end of the previous chapter that Li Xin is a microcosm of my own personality (of course, I am more cowardly, and I will not fight with others like him).

Well, I don't have an outline when I write a book, usually after setting a big main line, and then deduce it downward, when I write a book, I will think about how I would say it if I were this character, how to do it, because other characters are not modern people, so their personalities are relatively independent, but when I write about the protagonist, I will think about what a modern person will do when he encounters this situation.

For example, if I were Li Xin, I had a good relationship with the first emperor, and the royal family was not particularly bad, so I would be embarrassed to kill all the people and the family when I entered the capital.

If I were Li Xin, I would fight the Xianbei people, even if I knew that they were heinous crimes, but when I really saw children of three or four, five or six years old tied up in front of me, I would definitely not be able to do it.

But because of the plot arrangement, Xianbei people must die, so I arranged for Mu Ying to kill, not the protagonist.

The reason why I mention a lot of questions about the character of the protagonist is because the character of the protagonist of this book has been criticized by many people, and the main point of criticism is that the protagonist is "the virgin", "rotten good person", etc., I have read these comments with a very humble heart, and I have accepted some suggestions.

Of course, the protagonist must be ruthless when he should be ruthless, and a bad guy can't be the protagonist, but in the author's humble opinion, even if it is a .asxs. protagonist, he can't be ruthless without a bottom line, let alone ruthless for no reason, and he can't be ruthless for the sake of creating a decisive character.

There has to be a reason.

Take Li Xin as an example, if Li Chun was tied up in front of him, he would definitely stab him to death without blinking an eye, but he was too embarrassed to do anything about the irrelevant woman.

Of course, the reader is the author's food and clothing, and the reader's opinion is naturally to be absorbed, and the character of the protagonist of the next book will be set in advance, and it will not be substituted according to the author's character.

On the whole, this book is barely a beginning and an end, and I am acceptable on the whole, but many details have not been handled well, or they are very rough, for example, the assassination of the Son of Heaven in Nanshu in the early stage was very badly written, for example, Li Shen's ending was also handled very rubbish, and looking back in many places, I was not very satisfied.

However, online literature is like this, there is no regret in writing, it is impossible to revise it over and over again like physical literature, and as commercial literature, it is unlikely that it will be refined with hundreds of words or even one or two hundred words a day, so it can be all bearded and full of tails, and the whole has a look, I am already content.

I will take these questions into account when I come to the next new book, try to avoid these shortcomings, and try to write a work that is more complete and has fewer shortcomings than this book.

Well, it's late at night, and I'm going to go to bed after writing this testimonial, but I still have to thank some people.

Thank you to the readers who have chased it all the way from beginning to end, thank you to the readers who still see it even if you see some rough things, and thank you to all the parents who have subscribed to the genuine version!!

In this era when it doesn't cost anything to watch piracy, the gentlemen who can spend money to watch clumsy works are all upright gentlemen, and the subscription of all gentlemen is also the greatest support for the author!

Here's a special thanks to a big brother whose ID is called "Find Bugs"!!

This brother really makes me especially thankful, the author started writing books in 17, and since then, this big brother has spared no effort to help me pick out typos, I wake up every morning, the first thing is to read his comments, and then go and correct the typo!

It's been three years!!

Thank you so much! (If possible, please add a group to the big brother, I'll send you a red envelope or something, express my heart!) ）

Well, that's all for this testimonial.

I should send the new book within a week (if it goes smoothly), and if you can support it, the author should be remembered within five years!

Okay, brothers and friends, all parents.

We'll see you next book!