Everyone was very curious and asked what it meant to be painful but not sad but not sad.

Xie Yingying smiled: "This is the topic that Lin Gongzi gave me before. When I played Du Shi Niang, I rehearsed more than 20 times, but Lin Gongzi was not satisfied. said that he wanted to perform Du Shi Niang's 'sad but not sad, painful but not sad' emotion. How do I know that? I didn't figure it out after smacking it for many days. My mind is full of these eight words day and night, and I always don't understand the essentials. That's what it's called pain. ”

Everyone was stunned and speechless, secretly smacking these eight words, and suddenly they were speechless. It seems that I don't know how to express this emotion of 'sadness but not sadness but not sadness'.

"But you acted very well later, I cried when I watched it." Guo Caiwei said with a smile.

Xie Yingying said: "The county lord didn't know, but later I tasted it, he wanted my performance to be restrained and powerful, to be free to let go, in his words, not to be emotional." Lin Gongzi said: The actors on the stage cry, and the audience also cries, this is not called Gao Ming. The real cleverness is that the actors on the stage don't cry, but the audience cries. The former is called infection, and the latter is called resonance. Acting is about bringing the audience to resonate with the characters, not making them cry with you. After listening to this passage, I really grasped some of the essence. ”

The women looked at Lin Jue with admiration, and Guo Caiwei smiled: "I really didn't expect that my husband still has a deep study of this." ”

Lin Jue waved his hand and smiled: "It's just foolishness, in fact, some things are figured out." For example, when writing poetry and articles, isn't it the same? Words should resonate and make people feel related, that is a good poetry article. I guess that's how acting should be. I'm all foolish, and don't take it seriously. In short, if you think it makes sense, you listen to it, and if you think it doesn't make sense, you forget it. When Du Shi Niang's repertoire was performed, it was to win the Oiran, and Yingying had no experience at that time, so I could only ask her according to my own understanding. In fact, I'm not sure if it will succeed. ”

The crowd burst into laughter. Guo Caiwei smiled even more: "It turns out that you are also a blind commander, if your understanding at that time was wrong, wouldn't it be a big mistake?" ”

Lin Jue smiled: "How come? Du Shi Niang's script was written by myself, can I not know the proportions? Naturally, there is a spectrum in the heart. ”

Everyone nodded one after another, there is nothing to refute, the repertoire was written by him himself, the characters were created by himself, and the understanding of the character and temperament is naturally clear. Nature can be accurately grasped.

"Then what question does Lin Gongzi test me? Xiaoxiao dared to give it a try. Qin Xiaoxiao's heart swelled with a sense of competitiveness, and she was eager to try.

Lin Jue smiled and said, "That's it, I won't test you." I believe you are intelligent, and I have seen your performances. The advice I can give to you is that reading more books, enriching your heart, and better understanding the lyrics and characters will be of great help to the performance. You are like a warbler, you have been studying hard and increasing your knowledge, so her performance is perfect, and when she arrives, she will become popular everywhere, and the audience in Hangzhou Capital recognizes her, which is her ability. ”

Xie Yingying said shyly: "Son, don't praise me like this, I don't have the ability." ”

Lin Jue smiled: "This is not a boast, this is a fact. And Yingying has already learned to write her own script. This is the proof. If you write your own characters, you will be more handy if you act by yourself. ”

Xie Yingying's eyes lit up and said, "Have you finished reading the script?" Is it still eye-catching? ”

Lin Jue took out the script from his arms and said with a smile: "I have finished watching this "Red Dust", it is very well written, and I have decided to use it as the premiere of the semicolon theater." ”

Xie Yingying said excitedly: "Really? Can it really be staged? ”

Lin Jue nodded and said, "Yes, however, some modifications need to be made." In front of everyone, I would like to say a few comments and ideas, and if you agree, make some changes. ”

Xie Yingying nodded again and again: "You say yes, I will definitely revise it well." ”

Lin Jue looked at Xie Yingying and said, "If I don't understand it wrong, this "Red Dust Story" is based on your own experience, right?" I saw a lot of familiar shadows inside. ”

Xie Yingying's face turned red, glanced at the people around her, and said softly, "Yes." ”

This is indeed a book written by Xie Yingying based on her own experience, starting from the death of her parents and being sold into the Qinglou by relatives at home, until she emerged to learn skills and gain a firm foothold. Among them, refusing temptation, keeping oneself clean, and insisting on the practice of selling oneself without selling oneself; And there are so many coercions and threats, persuasions and temptations. In the end, I finally met my beloved, and I resolutely retreated bravely after winning the Oiran, and ended up with a happy ending. In essence, it is a story of struggle that is not willing to accept fate and does not submit to fate, and of course, it is also a story of two people who are happy with each other.

Lin Jue quickly saw through this when he read this, and Lin Jue saw the description of Li Gongzi who rescued the heroine inside, and shook his head with a wry smile. That Li Gongzi obviously wrote it according to himself, but it was written simply tall and full of no shortcomings at all. Not only is it both civil and military, but also has a noble character and is a decent person, which is simply a flawless image of Wei Guangzheng. Although this reflected his image in Xie Yingying's heart, it also made Lin Jue feel a little exaggerated and unreal.

Xie Yingying lowered her head and thought: "He saw through this, and the ending I wrote in the end was to tie the knot with the two of him and become his only woman." Will he think I'm too greedy? The county lord didn't know if she had read this, but if she saw it, wouldn't she be unhappy? ”

In Xie Yingying's thoughts, Lin Jue's words sounded: "It is true that for first-time attempters, writing stories based on their own experiences is a good way. You can avoid the risk of not knowing where to start. There is a saying that creation comes from life, and this is the truth. No matter what good the repertoire is, it should have the shadow of life and real feelings. It's a clever way to get started......"

Xie Yingying was happy in her heart, Lang Jun was praising herself, and she didn't think she had gone astray.

“…… However, there is a next sentence in that sentence: creation comes from life, but it is higher than life. Real life is trivial and even somewhat boring. If it is presented on stage, the story must be wonderful and concise. If the audience is allowed to sit in the audience for an hour or two, most of the time is trivial matters such as firewood, rice, oil and salt, and no one can sit still. Therefore, it must be refined and appropriately exaggerated, even fictional. Although the whole structure of your words is fine, I have to say bluntly that this book cannot be used for stage performances at present. If you want to open in a semicolon and become the first play, there are still a lot of things missing. ”

Xie Yingying's face was flushed, and she was a little embarrassed. There was still a compliment in front of the head, and these few sentences were almost completely denied. I used to say that I could perform on stage, but now I say that I can't at all. It's a bit embarrassing.

Lu Wu gently pulled the corner of Lin Jue's clothes, meaning that Lin Jue should not be so direct, in front of so many people, how could he not give Miss Yingying face.

Lin Jue was unconscious, and said to himself: "Yingying, I'm not trying to embarrass you, I'm teaching you how to write a script." You're not bad at what you're saying, but what I'm saying is that you need to revise it to perform on stage as a script, and that's what I said before, didn't I? ”

"Childe, please continue, Yingying listen." Xie Yingying raised her head and boldly looked at Lin Juedao. She is not the kind of person who is stingy, and she will not complain because of this, she is very good at regulating herself.

"Okay, I would like to make three comments. First, the plot cut out some trivial paragraphs. For example, the scene of practicing skills can be brushed aside. I suggested using the change of the slide screen to show the four seasons of spring, summer, autumn and winter, so as to express the effect of practicing the skill year after year. There is no need to use too long to describe it as arduous. We all know bitterness, but the audience is not interested. Lin Jue said.

Xie Yingying nodded and said, "Yes, I remember." ”

"Second, increase contradictions and conflicts. The role of mom...... Do not follow the prototype. I know that Sister Danhong has always been very good to you, but it doesn't show the difficulty of your situation in the script, and it doesn't show that it is not easy for you to get ahead. I suggest that the character of Mom be written in the most vicious way. The more vicious and ruthless, the more greedy and cruel the better. Lin Jue said.

Xie Danhong rolled his eyes to the sky and said, "I...... Am I that kind of person? Won't you destroy me? ”

Lin Jue smiled: "This is a script, it's fake." In reality, Sister Danhong is a first-class good person, which we all know. But you can't act like that in the script. We've acted in so many plays, don't you still understand the reason for this comparison? Li Jia in Du Shi Niang and the old lady in the West Chamber, don't they all have to have such people? ”

Xie Danhong smacked his lips and said, "That's it, for the sake of silver, I don't care anymore." ”

Everyone pursed their lips and snickered.

Xie Yingying nodded and said, "Okay, I'll change." ”

Qianqian suddenly gritted her teeth and said, "Just change it according to Li Youyuan's example." Forced people to pick up customers, took aphrodisiacs and ecstasy, whipped him, closed the small black room, and did everything. ”

Lin Jue smiled and said: "Yes, talk to Miss Qianqian, understand the shady behind it, and change it with Li Youyuan's prototype." ”

The crowd burst into laughter.

"What else? What else needs to be changed? Xie Yingying frowned and asked.

"The third and most important point is to increase conflict. No conflict, no drama. The biggest problem with this statement is that there is little conflict and it is one-dimensional. The faces of those benefactors are single, and this conflict is not full enough. I propose to add a heroine, increase the rupture of sisterhood, increase the fate of different women, enhance the sense of contrast and loss, and the sense of aftertaste. For example...... How about how many women fight for husbands? ”

“……”

Everyone was stunned and didn't know what to do.

"Hey, that's it...... Sprinkle dog blood...... This one...... Love Triangle ...... This one...... Competition, unscrupulous competition......" Lin Jue scratched his head and thought of a way to explain.

"I understand what Childe means." In the midst of a wide range of eyes, Zheng Nuanyu suddenly spoke.

"You know? You explain to us. Qin Xiaoxiao shouted.