Chapter 159: Min Tan Chunqiu Shuangzhai Association; Crazy Baoyu Daoxiang Village Changed Poems (5)
Chapter 65: Min Tan Chunqiu Shuangzhai Association; Crazy Baoyu Daoxiang Village Changed Poems (5)
When an incense burned out, Li Kun smiled and said, "Poets, do you have them?" ”
Since the title of Yongbai Begonia was set yesterday, Tanchun, Baochai, Daiyu, I have already spent it in my heart. In this way, the three of them were doubly careful, for fear that they would fall into the first place and their faces would not look good. At this time, Li Kun's words fell. The three of them walked to the table that Xiangling had already prepared, picked up the pen and began to write. When he put down the pen, Daiyu Baochai and the two were fine, Tanchun quietly shook his head, thinking that his talent was like this. I'm afraid that as the eldest sister said, it is not as good as Xue Lin and the others.
Seeing that the third girl had handed in the papers, Li Kun said to Baoyu with a smile, "Yours?" Don't be the first company, it's going to be empty! ”
"What's the matter, even if it's the first society, it's good or bad." As he spoke, Baoyu arrived at the table and wrote out the poem he had thought of. Of course, he didn't write the original Baoyu silently, but changed it himself. It's just a bit of a change.
Li Kun smiled, "That's the case, let's look at it in the order of handing in the papers." While speaking, Li Kun took Tanchun's over. Baoyu was busy stepping forward, and saw that in the poems of Tanchun, there was, "Jade is difficult to compare with the spirit, and snow is easy to lose the soul for the muscles and bones." I don't like it in my heart, but there is no other way. Li Kun, Baochai, Daiyu and others have read Tanchun's poems, but they have praised a few words.
Look at Baochai's sentence again, "The light pole knows that the flowers are more colorful, and the sorrow is so much that there is no trace of jade." "It's the same. And Daiyu's is still, "half rolled Hunan curtain and half closed door, grinding ice for soil and jade for pots." Steal the pear stamen and borrow a wisp of plum blossom soul. The moon cave immortals sewed their robes, and the autumn boudoirs wiped their cries. Shy and silently complained to whom, tired of leaning on the west wind and the night was dark. "This one, after reading it, Baoyu threw away a few points of joy from Fang Cai and Daiyu all the way. How can this ice and snow be held in a jade basin!
Li Kun spoke highly of Baochai's poems, but he was the two of them who welcomed the spring and cherished the spring, and felt that Daiyu's poem was very good. But the weight of the two of them is still very limited. Li Kun held the article in Baochai's hand, "In my opinion, if you are subtle and thick, you will finally let the manuscript go." ”
Tanchun said with a smile: "The old farmer of Daoxiang commented very fairly, but we seem to have read one less article!" ”
Li Kun said, "I read it, I can't compare to the draft." With that, Li Kun took the lead to Baoyu's table. Picked up Baoyu's poem and looked at it twice and smiled, "What did I say?" After just one glance, I knew that Yihong Gongzi was a tail, can you be convinced? ”
"My song is not very good, so why not be convinced?" At the end of the line, Baoyu has no opinion.
Xichun said, "Why did the old farmer of Daoxiang only take a look and say that this song should be the tail?" ”
Li Kun said: "If I say that I am fair, I will not be wrong." Don't look at the side, just look at the limited rhyme, which is wrong. Everyone is curious, they know Baoyu's talent, and it may be possible to fall into the first place, but if they use the wrong rhyme, then they can't talk about it. As soon as Li Kun put down the poem, he looked at it together.
I saw Baoyu's poem manuscript written: "
The golden wind enters the heavy door, and the seven sections are even a pot. Out of the bath is too real snow as a shadow, and Huansha Xiziyu is the soul.
The morning bell rings the green temple, and the evening drum is close to Daoxiang Village. Drunk leaning on the railing to find autumn, the interpretation whispered that the sun had darkened. (It's nonsense, but it's really a thought!! )
After Yingchun and Xichun read it, they knew that Baoyu's poem was a mistake. The word 'trace' should be used for limited rhyme. The word 'village' is used here, although it is thirteen yuan for the door word, but because of the restrictions, it is impossible to say. It should be charged, that is to say, the old farmer of Daoxiang has a good evaluation. Tanchun saw it, but he didn't say anything. Unlike in the original, Baoyu treated her very well at this time.
Baochai said: "The wrong rhyme, the rhyme is the rhyme, but it's a pity." As he spoke, he looked at Daiyu.
Daiyu said, "But it's a pity, both the 'Guoyan' and the 'Interpretation' are used, and it is even more difficult to respond to the solar terms." Especially the neck coupling is the best. In this way, you really don't fit the rhyme limit. Saying that, Daiyu looked at Baoyu and said, "It's just this first sentence, how did it come up like this?" The word 瑽瑢, can it have a deep meaning? Hearing Daiyu say this, Li Kun and the others took a closer look at the poem. However, Baochai listened to Daiyu's words, nodded slightly, and looked at Baoyu.
Baoyu was startled when she saw the second daughter, and hurriedly said, "I don't dare to say that I have a good hand, but I thought about something, and the incense was about to burn out again, so I scribbled it and barely made it up." At that time, I didn't think that I could get such praise from Concubine Xiaoxiang. ”
"Even if you don't think about it, it's a magic hand." Baochai spoke, and looked at Baoyu's poems with Li Kun. She felt in her heart that this poem seemed to contain some meaning. I just can't see it myself. But why did he use this code twice?
Daiyu saw that several people were reading the manuscript of the poem, bit her lip, paced in front of Baoyu, and said softly, "That 'Explanation' is very good!" ”
Baoyu frowned and said, "Sister Fang Cai said that there is a dictionary of understanding, but what is this dictionary?" ”
Daiyu frowned and said, "You really don't know? ”
"I really don't know." Baoyu shook his hands as he spoke.
Daiyu said, "I don't know, how to use it?" ”
Baoyu said, "I've said it! At that time, I was just thinking about Yong Begonia. and was urged by the incense. ”
Daiyu's face was overjoyed when she heard this, "Even if you think about begonia flowers, it is also a good time." ”
"I'm just talking nonsense, but my sister said, what kind of canon did you answer?" Baoyu's heart is twitching when she speaks, sister! Don't scare me! After watching the Red Mansion, I was most afraid of this.
Daiyu didn't know why Baoyu was nervous, but he could see that he was like this, so she smiled and said, "Don't you also have a solution by your side!" And that's not counting allusions? ”
"Do I have an interpreter by my side? My sister said something. How can I ever have such a text around me? Baoyu spoke, but his mind was racing.
"How could it not be! As I said the other time, my wife knows about it, right? As she spoke, Daiyu winked playfully.
Seeing Daiyu's playful side, Baoyu's mind instantly opened up, and seeing that a few people over there were still looking at the poems, she smiled quietly, "I guessed, my sister said this." ”
Daiyu said, "Tell me, guess something!" ”
"Needless to say? Since it is the 'love and good night flower explanation, the meaning is still quiet and the jade is fragrant'! Could it be that there is something else? I don't think so. Saying that, Baoyu snickered, and said in her heart, Sister Lin, this time you sent it yourself. It's just that I'm a little apprehensive in my heart, so don't worry about my sister.
Daiyu was not annoyed, but laughed, "Isn't that it!" It's rare to find this flower, jade, and it's very good. After speaking, Daiyu looked over there and said in a low voice, "I know that you like to put your mind on these things, but you don't dare to let your uncle know, and the scar forgets the pain." Could it be that you forgot the last time? ”
"What my sister said is true, I have to be careful, I have been sinned, but it's nothing, if I provoke the old lady to be uncomfortable, it will be my sin." Speaking, Baoyu sighed in her heart, sister, the two of us are not the same channel! The jade I'm talking about is not Baoyu's jade, but Daiyu's jade! It's not annoying.
Li Kun read the poems, and thought about it like Daiyu, thinking that Baoyu liked the girl's thoughts, so he ignored it, after all, this is Baoyu's old illness, so he said: "In the future, according to what Yihong Gongzi said, it will be good to start a society, and the flowers will bloom and bump into each other." But the rhyme of this question depends on me. In the meantime, if you are happy, you just have to choose another day to make up for it, even if you open a club every day for a month, or you can't bump into a club for a year, I don't care. ”
Baoyu and the others listened and agreed one by one, so everyone laughed again before gradually dispersed.
(End of chapter)