First of all, the protagonist entered the capital for the first time, Yu Liang misunderstood the emperor's meaning, thinking that the emperor was going to be unfavorable to Shen Zhezi and then forced Shen Zhezi to enter the capital to face the saint, and here can already set the tone of the fate of this character. Pen? Interesting? Pavilion wWw. ｂiquge。 ｉｎfo

The second time, when the protagonist arrived at Jingkou, Shen Chong greeted him, and the original words were "King Nanton, Yu Liang, and the dog thief should be punished." "Sooner or later, they will always have to pay the price." Because it is the protagonist's perspective narrative, Shen Chong's corresponding arrangement has not been explained.

Another time was on the side, what King Xiyang said to King Nanton, "Shen Shiju is a ruthless person, if you really make trouble enough to force him to make a move, this gap can not be resolved by words." Of course, this side is more blunt, but there is never much description of Shen Chong's ruthless side in the book, only a description of the backlash, aren't you curious?

More recently, it was still posted in the original text: "In the room, Shen Zhezi's face was calm, holding a jade ruyi, and he was playing with the swaying flames in the brazier.

The letter was sent by his father to his third uncle Shen Hong, telling him to look at the secret room alone and not show it to others. As for the content of the letter, after the initial surprise, Shen Zhezi's mood gradually calmed down, and then he began to think about how to adjust his many arrangements.

Although he knew that the Liyang military disaster was not far away, the arrangement made by Shen Zhezi around this incident was mainly to play a side game, and he did not plan to get involved in the center of the current situation too early. ”

The protagonist initially did not intend to stay in Jiankang, but after reading his father's letter, he decided to change his mind. At that time, no one asked what was in the letter to change my mind, I thought I had gotten to this point, but then someone asked why I wanted to stay in Jiankang?

As for the last few chapters, it's a bit much.

When Shen Zhezi heard this, his face suddenly changed, and he understood the deep meaning of Zhongshu's arrangement in Xuanyangmen. In addition to being close to supervision, it is also good to take yourself away at a critical moment. And the deeper meaning of this is probably that his behavior of sticking to the capital has aroused the suspicion of Zhongshu, probably thinking that he has some collusion with Liyang!

It's just that at the moment, Shen Zhezi doesn't have much fear of Zhongshu, and now the power that Gyeonggi Zhongzhong can really control, Zhongshu may not be stronger than himself. So he slowly got up and held the sword in his hand, and was just about to speak, when the general of the guard who spoke before spoke again: "Humble Liang Yong, and guard Shen Lang's safety under the orders of the book." ”

Hearing this, Shen Zhezi's eyes flashed, and he looked at the other party suspiciously, and the other party also responded with an undetectable chin. After a little silence, he called Liu Changlai, whispered for a while, and then walked out of his post and marched into Taicheng surrounded by many guards.

In this paragraph, he planned to resist the guards from imprisonment because he had enough strength, but when he heard the man's name be spoken, he changed his mind and agreed to be imprisoned. In other words, he didn't think about running away with Yu Liang and witnessing Yu Liang being killed, but he just wanted to know why this dead man took the initiative to contact him, and the focus was still on picking up the princess.

After standing in the court for a while, Shen Zhezi entered a small pavilion in the official office, and the guard Liang Yong ordered people to guard the doors and windows exits, and personally sent Shen Zhezi into the pavilion. ”

This place tells the plight of the dead, and it is difficult to get close to the book, so it is necessary to use the protagonist. A high-ranking official like Yu Liang can't get close to the dead for a few years, and I'm still complacent and rigorous. After all, Shen Zhezi was surrounded by reliable people, how could Yu Liang be assassinated so easily.

Shen Zhezi's knuckles holding the sword were faintly white, and the guard Liang Yong rushed up and grabbed his wrist heavily, Guo Yu and the others also looked over, Shen Zhezi glanced at the garden again, and finally pulled his foot to keep up with Yu Liang.

The section of escaping from Taicheng is also an aspect of his psychological struggle, whether to insist on killing Yu Liang, or give up killing Yu Liang to pick up the princess in Taicheng.

There were several large boats parked on the river outside Stone City, and Yu Liang and the others were the first to board one of the ships, including the close attachés around them, and Guo Yu and the others also followed Yu Yi. Seeing this, Shen Zhezi rushed forward and slashed his sword on the side of the ship and roared: "Today's rout, whose sin is it!" ”

In this paragraph, why are you angry for no reason? In order to board the ship by himself, he brought the dead soldiers with him by the way. And it was when he saw Guo Yu's own people boarding the boat that he became angry. In other words, until now, Yu Liang has not been able to pose a sufficient threat to the safety of the protagonist.

This is basically the foreshadowing of killing Yu Liang in details, as for the overall environment, it has always been moving closer to this aspect, including the harmonious relationship with Yuzhou Qiaomen, which has been deliberately described several times before, because Yuzhou Qiaomen is Yu Liang's basic plate. I'm well prepared for the succession, so in my opinion, it's also a natural result.

I admit that the foreshadowing is too scattered, and the tone of these relatively concentrated chapters is also somewhat obscure, and the style of online writing is not worth carefully smacking the words and sentences carefully. But even if there are details that everyone has overlooked, they will be clarified one by one in the later articles. And there are two or three similar lines, all of which have been laid for a long time, and when the plot arrives, it will naturally be picked out. As for the line, it is buried in what many consider to be too redundant.

As for the significance of killing Yu Liang, I believe that there are many people who have lost interest in understanding this, so I won't say more, and there will naturally be an explanation later.

As for the question of self-esteem, I think that if a new author can't stir up his interest in the text, even a slap in the face will be very boring. My self-esteem is not about the plot, because I am not a passionate person, I am not good at mobilizing people's emotions, and the slow pace is a birth defect, and if I have a little talent in this area, the results will be much brighter. The main problem with self-congratulatory is the description of political ecology, politics is different from clever scheming, and once it is discussed a little, the writing will be a little dull. But my development of the plot is mainly based on my understanding of the political ecology, and if I don't write this, the overall plot will be thin.

Now I don't dare to sigh indiscriminately, because I have seen that some people who don't know whether it is a reader or not are taking words out of context seriously. As I said at the end of the previous chapter, I hope to write a little bit about the atmosphere of this era, and make a little deduction based on historical data, so this book is destined not to involve too many systems and technologies that are too advanced.

As for the often ridiculed Yinjue, there is also a very detailed discussion above, that is, when Nandu, many overseas Chinese have been forced to leave the land, the most important means of production in the agrarian society, so there is the soil for the spread of Yinjue. If Wuzhong is changed, there will not be such an amazing effect, because the land output is the most stable. The business alliance was born based on the system of Yinjue, and if there was no big market in Jingkou created by Yinjue, it would not have been born.

Therefore, basically so far, while maintaining the atmosphere of this era, there are not too many loopholes in the logic, and it can barely be consistent. Of course, this is my own opinion, my perception does not represent the public perception, even if there are loopholes, I must selectively ignore them. Because once it is entangled, the logic of pushing forward basically collapses, and it is naturally impossible to write down. Of course, I hope to hand in a complete work, and then I will suffer from the praise and criticism.

Until now, the biggest difficulty for me is not the progress of the plot or the description of events, but the mentality. Having a good mindset is almost half the battle for an author, because you can't imagine what kind of people a book will face and what kind of criticism it will face. My mentality is actually very substandard, and I am even afraid to face the addition of new readers, because I know that this book is definitely not good enough for me to think of myself, and I have to continue to write against all the shortcomings and loopholes that have been pointed out one after another, which is also a great test for shame.

But even so, there is still hope for more recognition. Even a post criticizing this book, the landlord is willing to spend a lot of energy to construct a logic that he denies me, and what he does is nothing more than a sense of identity. For a book that takes more effort, the author naturally hopes to be more recognized, which is not something to be ashamed of.

As for the controversy of this plot section, about whether the killing of Yu Liang is abrupt or not, it has been said before, for readers with ten lines at a glance, it is indeed a little abrupt, but I am willing to give some patience, and I will add it later. Even if it's clumsy, but it will be attentive. Between the author and the reader, it is nothing more than intentions and appreciation, even if the author is blown to the sky, the background is like that, it is impossible to bear too much criticism and flawlessness, this is my humble place, but also the fortunate place.

As for the follow-up, Yu Liang's death is obviously a political event, who will fill the political void after his death, and even how to divide the sphere of influence after the rebellion is pacified, which is the focus of my conception of this plot. One reader said that the foreshadowing was so long that I was holding a fart, and this fart really choked me, should I explode the outline?

The new chapter has already said that the assassination of Yu Liang was an accident from the perspective of the protagonist, he didn't need to intervene, but the level of the dead man was not enough to rely on his strength, he died when he came to Yu Liang, and he didn't die if he didn't come to Yu Liang, this is a two-choice option, not a probability event.

As for the first few chapters, I said that I have been entangled with Yu Liang, and I can't see the meaning. Truth be told, even if it doesn't give the reader a signal of emotional preference, you need to give the protagonist a motive to kill.