Summary of the end of the volume (must see)
I finally finished writing the first volume of this book, and I looked back at the first volume and found a lot of my own shortcomings, especially very dissatisfied with the first fifty chapters of myself. But after all, it's the first time I've opened a book, so you should think it's my own practice. When I have time, I'll go back and rework the previous chapters to make some parts of the book look less obtrusive!
Maybe all the officials will think that the first volume of this book is too procrastinating, like white water, it can't arouse everyone's desire to chase more. This is my lack of writing to make the story too vivid. Because, in my outline, it is necessary to reproduce the appearance of the ancient countryside in the first volume, such as their customs, defects, and so on. That's why there is Zhou, the landlord Wu Yongkang, and the family of Wu Daoneng, who has a serious patriarchal mentality, the insatiable county Cheng Liang Shusheng and his gang, and the black-skinned brothers who eat the flesh of the dead.
But I also described some of the advantages of ancient times, such as the righteousness of Guan Juxiong and the fourth Song Dabao, the demeanor of Zheng Fuzi's Confucian disciples, and the nostalgia of the villagers who helped each other and survived the earthquake.
And in the first volume, I also deliberately arranged the protagonist to grow up from a baby, mainly to lay the foundation for the protagonist's future development. Although our book is just an alternate historical novel, you can't really be like in a pornographic novel, where you can create an epoch-making machine by writing and drawing, and you want to change the cultural traditions of a group of people for thousands of years by saying a few words!
You have to convince everyone of what you wrote based on the reality of the situation! In an era when even steel could not be mass-produced, you told me that in a few years it would take me to invent and manufacture all kinds of advanced firearms; In an era when you don't even know what chemistry is, you can develop smokeless gunpowder, detonator bombs; An ignorant race that still firmly believes in the imperial power and is not the king's land under the whole world, what kind of capitalism and communism do you play, do you think you can convince the officials?
Not to mention an era in which transportation is basically relied on walking and information is basically roaring, you will give me a global hegemony and bloom all over the place! Please tell me, such a big earth, you dominate the world, what do you rely on to maintain your rule!
So I wrote about the boyhood of Pig's Feet, painstakingly gathering a group of teenagers of the same age, and only by carefully cultivating the first generation of new ideas can we have the opportunity to talk about the future, to pass on the ideas we want to express, and to influence as many people as possible.
Maybe it's limited because of my limited ability, and maybe a lot of what I want to express can't get into people's minds, but I will do my best to write a story that is more exciting and beautiful.
Of course, in the second volume, our progress will be accelerated, and we will not be as procrastinated as the first volume. A lot of the foreshadowing has already been written in the first volume, and the second volume can follow the trend and not be repeated. If someone thinks that the front is not good, in fact, they can skip the first volume and read the second volume directly, I think the problem is actually not too big, after all, the things explained in the first volume are too complicated, and the actual main line is not written far, which will not bring a sense of jumping to the watchers!
Please look forward to the second volume, and I hope you will support my "Ming Hai Fengyun"!