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When I typed the words "the whole book is finished", my heart was full of emotion.
From November 1 of '15 to March 1 of '17, spanning one year and four months, I survived from constant changes.
I don't write books very fast, two chapters that can't be thundered in a day, and I believe many book friends are helpless. It's not that I don't want to write more, but sometimes I really don't know what to write, and I have to admit that there is indeed some suspicion of irrigation.
But the overall plot is still written according to my original ideas.
I'm still in college for 15 years, so I'm an angry young man, and I don't have much social experience, so the plot at the beginning was a bit taken for granted, so it collapsed.
After 16 years of social work, I slowly discovered my shortcomings. I want to go back and modify it, but it's locked and can't be modified. And I don't have much time to change the text, not only to work, but also to ensure constant changes.
Actually, I am very grateful to be able to see the last book friends from the beginning, your support is really important and important. Although writing books has always been my hobby, the interest that does not make money cannot last.
There are also book friends who voted for monthly tickets and rewards, thank you very much!
Of course, my editor also gave me a lot of advice.
Speaking of the plot, it was really too fast at first, and that's because when I started writing, I read a guiding article called the Golden Three Chapters.
Anyone who has read a few of my books knows that I started with the worst writing and then slowly got better.
This was supposed to take into account the cool point and wanted to sign a contract, so the plot caught up so quickly.
Yang Taishi in the book is a Zaifu who has no military power, in fact, he secretly accumulates dead soldiers, and is ready to seize power and usurp the throne after the protagonist's life. But then Lu Chengqi "returned to his soul", and he didn't have this opportunity. After all, Lu Chengqi is the emperor and holds the military power in the world.
After all, if you are a normal person, you will not have a power plot with Yang Taishi, you are a stunned young man, playing power tricks with others? I don't even know how to die! The only way is to cut through the chaos quickly and use absolute force to obtain absolute power. It's as simple as that.
Judging from the official history, the Ming and Qing dynasties had stricter control over civil officials, and Chongzhen, the king of the dead country, could beat and kill ministers, not to mention other emperors. As the emperor of the Ming Dynasty, none of them are stupid, saying that the faint monarch just doesn't want to pay attention to the government. Jiajing has not been in the court for 30 years, and he still doesn't handle the government the same way? What they lack is the courage to break the jars, and they are afraid of offending vested interest groups and causing some trouble. The most important thing for the emperor is to control the balance and fear that others will rebel. But people who know the historical process will jump out of this barrier and consider the overall situation, suppressing what should be suppressed, rectifying what should be rectified, destroying what should be destroyed, and building new construction, which is the advantage of the traverser. No matter how clever the ancients were, they still had historical limitations. The simpler the method, the more effective it is. Chongzhen also killed Wei Zhongxian to gain the greatest authority. Only those who have absolute military power will win politically. Why did the Song Ming and Qing dynasties guard against military generals? It is for this reason that once a military general participates in politics, the civilian official is not an opponent at all. Kangxi wants to kill Aobai, and Yongzheng wants to kill Nian Qianyao, the same reason. But as long as there are military generals involved in politics, they will not come with you, and as soon as they make a move, they will be thunderous. Take a look at the festival envoys in the middle and late Tang Dynasty, if you don't understand, you can also go to see why Zhu Di and King Ning want to oppose in the Ming Dynasty? The Han Dynasty also had the Rebellion of the Seven Kingdoms, not to mention the Zhou Dynasty, eight hundred princes.
Speaking of this book, the Da Shun I wrote can actually be regarded as the Great Song Dynasty, the same pinyin beginning.
The military system of the Song Dynasty was the most perfect in all dynasties. I think everyone understands one thing, control of the army is a prerequisite for consolidating dominance. Therefore, Dashun is also like this, the emperor himself directly commands the forbidden army, and divides the forbidden army into three parts: the front of the palace division, the guard horse military division, and the guard infantry military division, and promotes some junior and easy-to-control generals to command the army separately, so that they obey the emperor's orders respectively. The Privy Council was also set up to exercise the power to transfer troops, so that the "three commanders" had the right to command the troops but not the right to transfer troops, thus forming a role of mutual containment.
Of course, the Royal Military Academy was later established, and this system was even more perfect, and there was no longer any fear of soldiers who did not know the generals, and generals who did not know the soldiers.
The poison point of this book is in the front, and it will be much better if you survive the first thirty chapters.
Judging from the writing, I am gradually improving, I don't know if you feel it. The more I write in the back, the better, but because I'm still too inexperienced, the protagonist's appearance in the back is getting less and less. In fact, this is also the disadvantage of farming. No matter how good a person is, he can't do everything. There are three piles for a fence, and a good man has to help three people.
Some book friends said that the sense of substitution is not strong, and I have also thought about this problem. But I decided to write it this way anyway, so that I could write something different.
If you want to keep the whole article cool, I don't think I can do it. Maybe someone can do it, it's just a matter of level.
In my opinion, cool is a relatively low-level reading enjoyment, and a high-level reading enjoyment, I think it is a chapter that is inspired and resonates after reading.
To be precise, this is the private goods I want to entrain, and it is also my personal perception of history. In fact, as you can see, since writing this book for more than a year, my view of history will also shift a little bit, of course, the theme of national righteousness will not change, but there is more thinking about human nature.
It may be superficial, but I don't think there's anything wrong with that. Maybe it's worth losing some of the market because of this, and I think it's worth it. After all, it is not a renminbi, and everyone loves it. No matter how powerful the god is, there will be a day when he will be sprayed. I write mine well, I think it's worth writing, that's it. Think of it as my willfulness, there are a lot of starting points in Shuangwen, not bad for me, but I wrote what I wanted to write, and I think it was enough.
This one is actually quite tangled, first, the writing is not enough, the second is difficult to find information, the third is thankless, and the fourth is also a matter of experience. However, I am personally satisfied with this level of writing, and I will personally give a passing grade.
As a writer, writing a book with more depth has always been my dream.
Maybe it's not as good as it could be, maybe it's too deep, maybe it's not too likable in the market, but I think it conveys the values I want to convey, and I think it's worth it.
It's still the same sentence, there are many starting points in Shuangwen, not bad for me. Look at it slowly, and maybe your values will change as a result.
The current Chinese are just too impetuous to calm down.
If you can calm down and read slowly, you can learn a lot of historical knowledge from it.
Of course, I don't guarantee that I'm writing completely right, there will definitely be controversial points.
In the end, the ending was a little hasty, because I didn't plan to write about the Age of Discovery, I didn't plan to write about the Great Geographical Discoveries. As for going to the Americas, I just want to get high-yield crops. In ancient times, it was too difficult to rule the Americas, after all, it was too far away to be separated by a Pacific Ocean. To rule the Americas, it is better to help the Indians rise and fight against the West, right? Well, that's an idea, and if I thought I could write it, I would probably write it. However, the audience of foreign history has not been too large, and I am not a good writer, so it is a bit risky to write this.
The next book of the next book, let's still write about Chinese history, the Han, Tang, Song and Ming dynasties, the four dynasties, are all within the scope of my consideration. It's just that I haven't decided which dynasty to write about yet, give me some time, and wait for me to think about the plot before I start writing, and it won't be as hasty as this one. What is certain is that the next book will not write about the emperor, writing the emperor is thankless, and it seems that there is nothing to write about, it is all a routine.
If you change your profession and write, you might be able to write a good book, right?
I won't give up history, but now I write a city, February 8 has been sent to the creation of the world, that is, QQ Book City, the pen name can not be repeated very depressing, so it was changed to a "amorphous gel water", the new book is about feng shui, called "part-time feng shui master".
Piaoyi rain and amorphous gel water are both my pen names, and together they are rain, hehehe......
Here is an explanation of the Genesis Chinese Network, which is actually also owned by Reading Group, but focuses on QQ reading. The new book "Part-time Feng Shui Master" was first signed by Qian in the starting point, but after changing the draft five times, I voted for the creation of the world, one time, so I don't want to toss. Students who are willing to read at the starting point can also search for "Part-time Feng Shui Master" directly in the station, and the book is updated synchronously. New pen name: Amorphous Gel Water. Although the same group, the pen names on both sides cannot be interconnected, which is a bit hurtful. But it's okay, you just know that I wrote it.
Finally, thank you again for your support all the way, with your support, I will keep writing!
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