223. The plot of the comics

It was true that this staircase was not made of tofu dregs, and he didn't step out of a hole, but what he was stepping on now was a mud jar!

When Huang Zheng realized it, the black mud had reached his knees, and his body was still gradually sliding, like a swamp...... No, it was more terrifying than an ordinary swamp, in such a place, Huang Zheng couldn't use any skill at all, and could only gradually watch himself being swallowed by the black mud.

Why is there a swamp here?

Is it a hallucination? Or is it unbeknownst to others, and the ghost has been transferred unconsciously?

"I want to ...... Die once? ”

There was darkness all around, only the girl's depressed voice came from not far ahead, or a talented girl, but now the image has become doubly clear, as if the long black hair that blends with the darkness, the white face reflects the red red eyes, and the indifferent expression is compared to the coldness of the eyes, and there is no trace of human emotions.

She was wearing a beautiful kimono with markings, and her feet were not moving, but little by little the people were floating towards the mud altar.

If ordinary people saw this scene, they would probably faint with fright.

Of course, ordinary people may never encounter such a thing in their lifetime.

Huang Zheng smiled.

As we all know, the reason why supernatural affairs are horrible is because of human beings' ignorance of it, that horrible environment, tense air, and BGM that reminds you all the time that this is a horrible story, plus the monsters that suddenly appeared out of nowhere, this is the complete reason why people are scared.

But if you understand everything......

For example, in the future life filled with zombies, will you still be afraid when you see zombies?

There will still be horror, but at least you know how to resist.

"I was surprised to think that you, a guy with thick eyebrows and big eyes, would also act as an accomplice of death." Huang Zheng smiled and looked at the girl floating in front of him.

The girl didn't speak, just looked at him with extremely cold eyes.

"Hey, say something, although I know you're like this when things happen, it's not rude to exchange with the dead, at least let me know what I died for, don't you?"

"If you don't want to say it, then I'll sing you a song......"

About the girl was moved by Huang Zheng's heart, and before Huang Zheng started singing, she opened her mouth and asked, "Do you know me?" ”

"Hell Maiden Enma Love, Master of Hell Communication, pleases those who reclaim their grievances and banishes the cursed to Hell...... Am I right? ”

The girl didn't reply, but Mingming acquiesced.

Huang Zheng frowned, "So I kind of want to owe Heng, since you have your own affairs, why did you suddenly find me?" And in my opinion, your business and the business of the Grim Reaper should be completely incompatible, so what should I be damned with? ”

"Death...... Is that what you call him? ”

"Him?" Huang Zheng's heart moved, "It seems that you really know each other very well, huh...... This world is really getting fresher and fresher, could it be that because of my incursions, the secrecy of this world is also constantly rising? Otherwise, you guys who shouldn't be found in the usual world will be a bit of a debt to Heng when they come one after another, and if this continues, even if one day, a guy named Haruhi Suzumiya comes to me, I probably won't be frightened. ”

"By the way, according to your talents, there seem to be a lot of people in your world who do this kind of thing that makes people die, so who are there besides him and you in your mouth? Is there a Grim Reaper who loves apples? Is there a god of death who carries a scythe and slashes at people? Is there a Grim Reaper called Little Pop Shrimp? Is there a god of death who will turn into a bull's head and shout that the sky locks and slashes the moon? Is there a small door that wears glasses and never grows up? ”

Enma Ai was expressionless and said coldly, "You have too many questions, please forgive me for not being able to see it." ”

"That's a pity...... Huang Zheng sighed, at this time his upper body was almost sunk into the mud altar, leaving only a skull, "In that case, we don't have much to say, please browse my singing...... Ahhhhh

The moment the song sounded, Enma's expressionless face finally changed a little, and then, a gust of wind blew, and the swamp and darkness, including the expressionless black-haired girl, all flew in front of Huang Zheng like a burst of sand.

And he was still standing at the top of the staircase on the seventh floor, and the handrails of the stairs next to him that should have been destroyed were also intact, as if everything that happened to Shicai was an illusion.

Huang Zheng frowned slightly, when Yan Moai found out in front of him for the second time, he already knew that he was encountering an illusion, if he was frightened in the hallucination, and then accommodated and died, he would probably really die, but he could break through the illusion, and all problems could be solved.

He can understand that the Grim Reaper is only using the usual methods for those girls, and when he kills himself, all kinds of secret skills will come out, but ......

Does Enma love really exist? Or was it just a hallucination that the Grim Reaper made him see?

Huang Zheng has no answer to this point.

"So, in fact, it's just the two of you who have lost their phones?"

Came to Shiina Mashiro's apartment, Huang Zheng saw Mashiro and Xiao Chiyo again, since the Grim Reaper's indicator this time is himself, the two are naturally safe, but the two of them have no battery on their mobile phones at the same time, which is really coincidental and makes people want to complain.

"Hey, hey." Xiao Chiyo smiled, called out to Huang Zheng to sit down in front of her, and then handed over the paper and pen naturally, "Since you're here, just sit down and draw comics together." ”

I came all the way here with me, and escaped from the pursuit of death with all the hardships, so I came to draw a cartoon for you?

Huang Zheng didn't pick up the pen and paper handed by Xiao Chiyo, but said: "I can only read comics, not draw comics." ”

"It doesn't matter, you just work hard to paint black, this is easy, just learn a little." Chiyo scratched her head and smiled, "To be honest, I'm a little busy on my own, but here." ”

"When is the Newcomer Award submission?"

"In a month."

"Isn't that a long time?"

"That's what I said, but ......"

"I drew it from scratch." Xiao Chiyo was only halfway through speaking, and Mahaku, who had drawn the original manuscript next to him, stopped his pen suddenly, and said to Emperor Zheng, "After the explosion of Sakurazhuang, all the original comics are gone, and the follow-up plot can't be connected again, so I drew a new comic." ”

"Oh, what does the new manga look like?"

"There." Mahaku stretched out his hand and pointed to the right side of the table, where a stack of manuscripts was piled up.

Huang Zheng picked it up easily, and he hadn't read the story yet, but just looking at the first page, it was not difficult to tell that it was just a bunch of storyboards, with almost no background, and the characters only had lines, but pen and ink...... Hey?

Huang Zheng was stunned for a moment, and he obviously found that the name of this cartoon was really called - The Boy of Plum Blossom Village.

The comic is about a teenager who draws comics with porridge, he has the best academic performance, even if he doesn't study well, he can score 100 points in each subject, but he doesn't have much knowledge about ordinary life, and he is introverted, there are no people around him, he lives alone in Meihuazhuang, and he dreams of becoming a huge cartoonist.

One day, the girl was drawing cartoons in the plum blossom village as usual, and the house was inexplicably angry, and the boy was caught in a fire, and he was in great pain, but he couldn't escape because he had no knowledge of life.

Just as Qianjun was firing, a sports goddess rushed into the plum blossom village, and before the boy was about to faint, she picked up the boy in the posture of a princess and rescued him from the scene of the fire.

Due to the fire, the boy who lost his residence and the comics was grief-stricken, and the goddess of the sports department felt pity for it, so she helped the boy to explore a new place to live together, and drew comics together, during this time, the two established a sticky bond, and the boy also fell deeply in love with the goddess.

But the good times didn't last long, when the boy's life problems were solved, the goddess rarely came to him, and in the school, he often saw the goddess of his porridge, and the handsome and famous boys in the school got together, talking and laughing, the boy felt very sad about this, but he still loved the goddess.

The boy decided to find a time to confess to the goddess, but at this moment, the boy saw his goddess hugging the first male god of the school, and later dated the first and second male gods of the school and the three hidden male gods.

Seeing this scene, the boy completely broke off.

He went home and slept for a while, and the next day he woke up to the bright sunshine of the morning, and finally woke up...... It turned out that he didn't fall in love with the goddess, he just longed for the athletic ability of the goddess Yiqun, and yearning and love were the farthest distance.

Yes, the boy didn't fall in love with the goddess, he just longed for that distinct existence.

But the boy knew that he could never be that kind of being.

As a result, the boy was once again lonely.

End!

……

When he read the first few pages, Huang Zheng knew that this comic was adapted from the story of himself and Mahaku, but in the comics, the genders of the two were reversed, and Mahaku became a teenager, and he became a goddess...... In other words, such a porridge painting sex turn, you go to draw the type of moon, there are no fungi in this world, and the painting type month must be hot.

However, continuing to look down, Huang Zheng found that the development of the plot completely exceeded his expectations, the goddess in the comics was completely drawn as a Bichi, and the superior impression at the beginning began to change completely in the opposite direction with the development of the plot...... But, wait!

Does this plot look inexplicably familiar?

And it seems to be happening today, what kind of environment is this?

Could it be that the picture of himself and Yukina hugging each other at that time was also seen by Mashiro? Asking Rin Shibuya on a date...... Well, this must have spread throughout the school, and it's hard to even think about it.

So, this is the plot of the sudden change in the painting style in the second half?

Huang Zheng raised his head to look at Zhenbai, and found that Zhenbai was also looking at him intently, as if he was waiting for his evaluation of the comics, so he asked, "This is what was drawn today?" ”

"The first half of the volume was painted at Chiyo Kochiyo's house, and the second half of the volume was painted today."

Well, the environment is already clear at a glance.

Huang Zheng believes that if he rescued Zhenbai from the fire, even if he won't make her fall in love with him, he will have a good impression, the grace of saving his life is greater than the sky, and he is so handsome. Therefore, Mahaku took this as inspiration and drew such a comic, although the sugar in the first half of the volume was her brain supplement, but it was probably she who had some kind of expectation for it, so in the comics, the goddess would continue to help the boy, so that the emotions of the two continued to heat up.

But in the second half of the volume, Mashiro first showed something, and as a result, she began to feed to the readers.

The real development is different from her brain supplement, so that her fantasy is broken, so in the comics, the image of the goddess begins to gradually collapse, and finally becomes a blue pool, and the male and female protagonists completely part ways.

As a cartoonist, there is nothing right or wrong about drawing such a plot, but Huang Zheng thinks that Zhenbai is not completely disillusioned with the goddess like the male protagonist in the comics, otherwise he may not be able to enter this house today...... Approximately, she wanted to experience this manga to confess her dissatisfaction with herself, and after meeting with Kochiyo, he had almost no contact with Mashiro.

But, he won't be blamed for this, who asked the system to arrange the Grim Reaper to deal with him one after another, so that he didn't occasionally support anything other than the target, even if he wanted to help, it was not good.

"I thought it wouldn't."

Huang Zheng put down the comics and said so.

When Huang Zheng's voice fell, not only did he pout, but even Xiao Chiyo took back the tea that had just been brewed and handed to Huang Zheng...... Hey, I said don't do that!

Huang Zheng quickly stood up and snatched the tea back, knowing that the two sisters were dissatisfied with their slander of their paintings, so they had to answer patiently: "At the beginning, comics are things that bring happiness to people, and this cartoon of yours, although it gave people the feeling of youth love comedy at the beginning, but in the later development, it is completely the kind of NTR way in **, such a thing will not bring happiness to anyone." ”

"But I thought this comic was very realistic." Xiao Chiyo immediately objected, "The male protagonist of the comic is introverted.,Not good at socializing with people.,So there's no one around.,Because of an occasional acquaintance with the goddess of sunshine in the school.,But the two of them live in the world.,In the end, it's like that.,I thought there was nothing bad about it.,Although it's a little sad.,But it's really expensive.。 ”

"I think it's really kneeling." Huang Zheng scoffed, "Exploring the real feeling in the two-dimensional world, Xiao Chiyo, is your braincase okay?" ”

"I also thought there was no problem with what Chiyo said." Xiao Chiyo was speechless for a while, and Mashiro immediately retorted, "The editor told me that Kangle is not the only comic, humor is king, only the story is funny, whether it is Kangle's comics or realistic and heavy comics, they will be greeted by readers, such as five centimeters per second, there is a magical girl Madoka, isn't that an advanced comic?" ”

"But,Black deep cripple and life and death routines are no longer suitable for the current version.,Heisei ruined houses won't recycle this kind of sadistic plot.,If you don't believe it.,You can call your editor.,See if she's for or against such a comic.。

After finishing speaking, Huang Zheng calmly tasted tea.

On the other side, Mashiro was speechless, and Chiyo also lowered his head.

In fact, not long ago, the compilation of Mahaku was still in this house, and I also watched her newly painted storyboard, and the compilation of the first half was very freehand, but the basis for the second half of the proposal was not much different from what Huang Zheng said, and it was easy to say that such a plot did not meet the preferences of most readers.

Although the compilation also made Mashiro dot the plot on the back, Mashiro did not suggest recovering her.

Huang Zheng saw that the arguments of the two were overturned by himself, and immediately said: "Actually, according to my opinion, we can change the plot of the second half, for example...... Although the protagonist saw the goddess hugging and dating other boys, what he saw in it was not true, which turned out to be a misunderstanding. ”

"Misunderstanding?"

"Yes, it's the goddess who is too popular, all the boys want to pursue her, and the goddess doesn't have porridge for them, it's just that she's not good at refusing the kindness of others, and she's relatively slow about emotional things, so to speak, she doesn't know what love is at all, so when those boys ask her for a date, in order not to make the people around them conflict, they can only date together."

Zhenbai frowned, and found that things were not easy, "Isn't it out of place to be an emotionally dull person, but to be able to realize that the boys are pursuing her?" ”

"That's right." Xiao Chiyo also nodded, "And if it's not porridge, then simply refuse, not porridge but dating with the people around you, it's really like treating other boys as spare tires, such a setting...... I think it's double the blue pool than the heroine set by the real white.,At least the heroine of the real white.,No matter what you do, it's very bright.。 ”

Huang Zheng took a sip of tea stuck in his throat, couldn't swallow it and couldn't squirt it out, and felt particularly painful.

How can you two give so much advice, I don't usually see you so diligent when you study!

And,There are many porridge and his heroines around the hero.,But the hero is negligent for any heroine.,And everyone is connected to the relationship.,Even when dating, it's the people around you.,This is clearly the most classic routine in the harem manga.,Why is it now a different gender.,The heroine who has the same routine as the male protagonist in the harem manga has become Bichi?

In this way, the people around me are the same, very tolerant of themselves, but very strict with others.

Eh, wait!

In the past, Xiao Chiyo's words aroused Huang Zheng's attention.

The heroine set by True White is very bright and fair no matter what she does?

The goddess in the white manga is his sexual turn, there is no doubt about it, although because his act of making merit to save people was misunderstood as stepping on a few boats, so there is such a caricature, but it seems that the impression is not bad to the point of badness, at least, the point of being bright and fair is a plus, right?

Thinking of this, Huang Zheng had an idea.

"In short, the setting is like this, according to such a setting to draw youth love comedy comics, whether it is the compilation or the reader will be porridge."

"But I'm not porridge." Mahaku shook his head.

"So, the comics you draw now, do you cook your own porridge?"

"......" Mahaku was speechless again.

Huang Zheng smiled and began to throw out his routine, "Since it's not porridge, let's just change the theme, the comics of the love paradigm are no longer suitable for the current version, and now the themes of friendship, motivation and fantasy are more popular, so let's draw this kind of comics." ”

Mahahiro blinked, as if he was a little excited, but a little hesitant, and Xiao Chiyo simply said, "Although such a theme is good, there is no suitable idea." ”

"I have! I've thought of one of the best themes before...... At an ancient high school in Japan, due to the reduction of the number of protégés enrolled, it was in danger of abandoning the school that nine brave girls stood up to protect their school and decided to become idols! Becoming an idol will increase the fame of the school, and the number of protégés will also increase, and as a result, nine girls with distinct personalities will begin to move forward on their path to idols...... How? ”

Chiyo's eyes lit up suddenly, "It sounds like it's funny, it's really white, what do you think?" ”

Mashiro's thoughts seemed to be drawn back to the manga by nervousness.,Think about it carefully.,Say: "Although it's really funny.,The editor also told me that the more girls.,The more popular the manga will be.,But ...... I don't care about music, and I don't know how to draw music-themed comics. ”

"That's not a problem at all!"

Huang Zheng immediately took out a form from his pocket, "Our Sino-Japanese Cultural Exchange Department happens to have three of the most talented members in music, and one of them is a retired idol who can answer all your questions, so ...... Now enter my club, and our whole club will help you draw comics together! ”

When Serious Bai and Xiao Chiyo finally filled in their names on his club form, Huang Zheng was so moved that he almost cried.

It's finally this far...... Mahime, Rin, Yukina, Mahaku and Chiyo, and then trick Yukino into his harem...... Oh no, his heroine Tiantuan can really be mobilized, and when the time comes, what is the Grim Reaper?

Excited, he even had an urge to immediately knock on Xue Nai's inner room upstairs, of course, he finally suppressed this impulse, Xue Nai's character is more difficult, and there is no suitable opportunity and reason for the line to owe Heng.

And in the future, in order to allow Mahaku to quickly integrate into his community, he began to take the initiative to discuss the creation of comics with Mahaku...... Mahaku's original comics have repeatedly expressed his dissatisfaction with him not taking the initiative to contact her, and now such a move can not only ignite Mahaku's enthusiasm for the new comics, but also dissipate her dissatisfaction, and further shorten the distance between the two, which can be described as killing two birds with one stone.

As for how the plot of the manga should be developed?

He's not engaged in comics, just be a copyist, so many reborn people have invested in the industry of copyists, and there are not many more than him.

Of course,It's not Huang Zheng who draws comics by himself.,If all the plot is thought about by him.,Then there's only one original artist left in the real white.,About ordinary people won't pay attention to this.,But if the real white wants to become an advanced cartoonist.,Definitely won't be freehand.。。

Therefore, Huang Zheng did not take the initiative to supply the script, but experienced the method of borrowing and waving.

For example, when Seriously Bai began to think about how the heroine should be set, Huang Zheng briefly provided a suggestion, saying: "How about using a sunny and open-minded heroine?" An optimist who can get up at any time, has a high level of team cohesion, and once he has decided on something, he will not wait to abandon it, and he will do what he says until he wins...... Such a character setting will not make everyone porridge, and it will not be annoying to readers, and it is relatively in line with the setting of the protagonist of the comic. ”