Chapter 176: The pen is for you, you will write
", this old man's conscience!"
At this time, Su Xun's eyes immediately lit up, he really didn't expect that he was speaking for himself.
In this way, Su Xun probably has a number in his heart, it seems that he really didn't choose it himself, there must be something wrong, so he didn't win the award.
Countless people's eyes have looked at Linjiang No. 1 Middle School, is there any story in this?
The teachers in many schools don't look very good, and they say that there must be no changes.
Just now, they all frantically ridiculed a wave of things that Linjiang No. 1 Middle School did not win awards, if the plot is reversed, wouldn't it be very embarrassing.
The face of the cold night Shenghua didn't look good at this time, after all, this situation was equivalent to someone questioning him in public, and it was strange that his face could look good.
I only heard him say: "Lao Hu, I know what you said, just now in the background, haven't we already discussed this article?" ”
"Although the writing of this article is okay, there are too many bells and whistles in the whole article, and it is more vulgar than the topic, and it is difficult to get into the elegant hall."
Hanye Shenghua said it seriously, and there seemed to be a good reason.
In fact, when he saw this article, he was also a little surprised, not like a junior high school student wrote it.
If it weren't for the fact that he had tested it, he might have wondered where the article was copied from.
At that time, many members of the Writers' Association also felt that Su Xun's article was quite good, let alone win an award, and it must be the first prize, compared with others, it feels that it is not a grade at all.
I thought that there was no suspense in the first prize, but who knew that the person who gave birth to flowers in the cold night raised opposing opinions.
Because this guy is more serious, the book he wrote is like this, and the character of the person is the same, and Su Xun's article is really too out-of-the-box.
I feel uncomfortable no matter how I look at the flowers in the cold night, it's too casual, and I am suspected of deliberately showing off my literary talents.
Of course, there is a small reason, Su Xun's extreme narcissism in the article makes Han Ye Shenghua a little unhappy, just because Han Ye Shenghua is more handsome, so he is also a very narcissistic person.
In his opinion, he is the most handsome man in the world, when is his turn, how to look at it and how uncomfortable.
To put it bluntly, there is nothing wrong with what Su Xun wrote, but it is not his appetite, so Hanye Shenghua did not plan to give an award.
He is the boss of the entire writers' association, and the opinions of other people are certainly useful, but they are not as important as him.
Cold Night Shenghua is so opposed, what else can others say, they can only acquiesce to this fact.
In addition to feeling some pity for Su Xun in their hearts, they couldn't say anything, and after raising objections with Han Ye Shenghua, I am afraid that life will not be easy, this person is notoriously bad-tempered.
Just now, the old man has a relatively straight temperament, and he can say it directly to question him, after all, he is also a lot older, and he is not afraid to wear shoes barefoot.
After Su Xun heard this, he was also speechless for a while, and said in his heart that it was difficult for a special mother to get into the hall of elegance, and Lao Tzu's composition did not write anything vulgar, what is the hall of elegance?
It's just a random reason, Su Xun doesn't know why this person is targeting him, but he can hear that this is just an excuse.
If you want to find an excuse to target you, there are countless excuses, and it's easy to find it.
So Su Xun asked: "Then tell me, what I wrote, why is it difficult to get into the hall of elegance, what is the hall of elegance?" ”
Now that this issue has been mentioned, Su Xun will no longer tolerate it, anyway, this breath can't be swallowed.
Maybe the award is assessed, and it's not easy to change, but it doesn't matter, I have to make this cold night uncomfortable, I have to disgust him, who made him pretend to be so forced.
Facing Su Xun's questioning, the cold night gave a glance at Su Xun with deep and bright eyes as deep as the starry sky.
There seems to be a hint of unhappiness in it, but he still said: "As we all know, this is a competition for middle school students' essays, and what is written must be close to the core of the essay." ”
"Composition is to have some positive energy in it, in order to have a better impact, which is also an important evaluation criterion in the selection, aside from the aspect of writing."
Han Yesheng's mouth is still quite neat, but I just heard him say: "I took a look at your composition, and to be honest, the writing is good." ”
"But the content is too casual, and the whole article is full of praise for yourself, what is the difference between this and the jokes on the Internet, what is the nutrition?"
"Oops, I'm going to ————"
Su Xun was almost stunned by him, and said in his heart that this person was really good at pulling calves, and he was almost surrounded by him.
It's just an essay, and he can still pull so many things, no wonder this person can't write so much, the reason is that he is too good at it.
Composition is not just composition, it is an examination of students' literary skills, you can write your own feelings, you can write interesting things in life, you can use it to miss the past, and naturally you can also look into the future.
As long as there are no obvious problems, writing and ideas are naturally the most important of them.
In this competition, there is no restriction on the topic, and now he suddenly said that there was a problem with what Su Xun wrote, which made Su Xun quite unhappy.
I only heard Su Xun say: "After talking about it for a long time, you are still talking about it." ”
"What I wrote, it seems that I am boasting about myself, but in fact I am just covering up my own thoughts in it, what I want to expose is how difficult their lives are for those handsome people, which is a serious social problem."
Su Xun didn't instigate him, and continued: "Then you tell me, why is there a problem, no, you can take out other essays and show them to me, I'll take a look at those who have won awards, how deep they are." ”
I didn't plan to waste time here, but I thought I'd leave after the selection was over.
Who knew that encountering this kind of thing really made Su Xun quite unhappy, and he had to be on this cold night today.
If it weren't for the large number of people, Su Xun would have wanted to slap him with two big mouths, it was too much!
Han Ye Shenghua's face looked very gloomy, and it was naturally impossible for him to compare other compositions with Su Xun, because it was indeed not of the same grade.
This guy can only continue to quibble: "You are still young, you have no social experience, and you don't know the depth of the article." ”
"Okay, good, you're the best, come, the pen is for you, you can write." Su Xun said directly.