"Really?" When Shen Xin heard Yan Fei's words, he didn't show joy, and pointed to another name and said, "Sister Yan, there is another one." ”

Hearing this, Yan Fei put away her smile and moved her gaze to another name.

The title of the book is the same, it is also "Basketball Boy", the length is about the same, about 60 pages, but the tension of the story is far less than the first one.

Mainly talking about a basketball student who is about to graduate from junior high school, when he went to various high schools to step on the spot and choose a suitable high school, he accidentally met a person in a wheelchair playing basketball on the court on the open-air basketball court.

The two had a competition, but the special student found that he was not the opponent of the wheelchair youth.

Not to be defeated, he left, and after a short time, he found a wheelchair and exchanged wheelchairs with the wheelchair youth, but failed again.

In the end, the special student who lost the competition wanted to ask the origin of the youth, and the young man said that he was originally a member of the provincial team, and later, he accidentally fell from the building and broke his leg, but he still likes to play basketball, so he came to this school and served as a basketball teacher.

When the special student heard this, he finally made up his mind and chose to apply for this school......

Yan Fei looked at this cartoon and frowned.

The two short stories are both basketball comics, but they represent completely different contents.

The first is a normal game, which takes place in the last moments of a key game, killing the protagonist of the opponent and becoming a hero-like character, which is also the most frequent routine in the royal road comics, and at the same time, the fierce confrontation that sports comics want to embody is also expressed in this name.

The second article is closer to the lives of ordinary people, and since anyone can encounter this kind of thing, the reader's sense of substitution is also stronger.

In addition, the focus of the two names is different, the first article pursues "higher, faster, stronger", and the second article is blood and sweat, as well as the unyielding character of wheelchair youths for hobbies.

The first article tells about basketball from a higher dimension, and the second article tells readers that basketball that ordinary people are familiar with is like this, everyone does not have superb skills, but they are full of love for basketball.

In Yan Fei's opinion, these two comics have their own advantages and disadvantages, if possible, she wants both, it is estimated that with Shen Xin's painting work, she can show all the advantages of these two comics.

It's just that it is impossible for Shen Xin to draw two short stories - 60 pages per sentence and 120 pages per sentence, which is equivalent to updating half a single book for free.

Everyone has worked hard for more than a month, but the rewards are limited, and the gains outweigh the losses.

Based on this, one or the other must be chosen.

After thinking about it again and again, Yan Fei rubbed her hands and looked up at Shen Xin.

"You can only choose one or the other."

"yes. Even if you choose one or the other, it's a lot of work. Shen Xin said.

"If that's the case...... Yan Fei hesitated for more than ten seconds before saying, "I'll choose the second one." ”

Xi Muhan was flipping through the second name, and when he heard Yan Fei's words, he also raised his head and said curiously: "Sister Yan, I think the first one is also very good." ”

"The first one is good, but its advantages and disadvantages stand out." Yan Fei sighed and said.

"Huh?" Xi Muhan was stunned for a moment, a little puzzled.

The first short story tells the most tense and exciting part of a game, the looks of reporters and spectators, the actions and language of the players, portraying the tense atmosphere in the story, and Mr. Shen's storyboard also shows the fierce confrontation of the athletes one by one. Just looking at the name, my blood is boiling, and if the finished product comes out, it is estimated that it will be even more exciting and exciting.

"However, in 60 pages, 10 athletes, coaches from both sides, journalists, spectators...... talked about too many characters, and the characteristics of these characters were not shaped. To be honest, I think the best way to get readers drawn to the story is to have a long foreshadowing before this short story. If it's part of a long story, then it's completely ok, or even the finishing touch. As for the short story...... I'm not quite sure it's a complete story, and it might be more appropriate to say it's part of the story. ”

Yan Fei looked at Shen Xin nervously.

Shen Xin nodded, this part is considered a high story. The tide is also the most exciting part of a game, but as Yan Fei said, this is a part of the story, not a complete plot.

His purpose in painting this article was to let other magazines know the selling point of the next work, and to make it easier to negotiate, and that's it.

"Next." Shen Xin said.

"The advantage of the second article is that there is a strong sense of substitution, and many people have had the experience of playing on the court, which is easy to resonate with readers. The only thing that is different from other comics is that there is an extra wheelchair youth. His appearance elevates the theme of the work. The downside is that the plot is too bland, allowing people to see the end of the story at a glance. Perhaps for the sake of space, the wheelchair youth in the work introduces himself, which I think is the weakest way to express himself. Rather than say it yourself, let others find out. ”

After Yan Fei finished speaking, she remembered that she was equivalent to refuting Shen Xin's two short stories, but strictly speaking, these two names are not as unbearable as she said, and they are also two very wonderful names.

If any of them are directly handed over to the magazine, they will definitely be serialized, and with Shen Xin's previous popularity, they can also gain high popularity.

&nbe does fall short, and that's true.

Shen Xin tapped on the table, his eyes staring at the second name in Yan Fei's hand.

In fact, this story is an excerpt from another basketball manga "Real" by Yuhiko Inoue, which is an inspirational manga with the theme of wheelchair basketball.

He thought of "real" because he thought of Yang, a young man who also loved basketball but was confined to a wheelchair.

Yan Fei saw that Shen Xin was silent, thinking that Shen Xin was hesitant in his heart, and after a long time, he still felt that he should say a few more words: "Teacher Shen, I know that you are very popular in China now, even if the next work is just of average quality, it can still be a big hit." Of course, these two names are not bad, but as your editor-in-charge, I still hope that you will pay more attention to the details. There are a lot of people behind you? ”

"Huh?" Shen Xin looked up at Yan Fei who was standing in front of him, "I'm thinking about the modification of name......"

"Ahem...... Excuse me. Yan Fei hurriedly coughed twice, slightly embarrassed.

"You're right, the first name, the structure is a bit bloated, after all, there are too many characters involved, and the plot is difficult to perfect. So, I decided to restructure the story based on the second name, which would take about two days to complete. Shen Xin made an "OK" gesture towards Yan Fei, "Since you want to do it, you must do your best." ”

"Really?" Yan Fei said happily.

Shen Xin's decision was completely unexpected by her.

"Of course...... Xiaohan, find out the photos we took when we traveled, I want to choose the scene there, and I also need to use the photos when we met Yang. Shen Xin looked at Xi Muhan.

"Okay."

Xi Muhan returned to his desk, opened the cloud disk, and looked for photos, while Wang Wenhong walked into the studio weakly, followed by a woman.

Wang Wenhong knocked on the glass door twice, and the three people in the room moved their eyes to the glass door in unison.

When Yan Fei saw the woman following Wang Wenhong, she was stunned at first, and then she was overjoyed, "Xiaoli, are you here?" ”

Shen Xin also recognized the woman in front of him, who was Yan Fei's colleague in "New World", Wu Xiaoli.

"Sister Yan, you're getting married, of course I'm going to come to see you." Wu Xiaoli opened her arms and hugged Yan Fei.