Don slammed the table, threw back a few manuscripts handed in by an elf beauty, and yelled, "No! Unqualified! Hit back and rewrite! Remember! Three Golden Chapters! Three Golden Chapters! ”

Donn's roar frightened the beautiful elf in front of him, his ears drooped, and he craned his neck and lowered his head with an embarrassed expression.

She is a very popular poet in the Emerald Corolla, and the poems she writes are very popular with other sisters, and she originally thought that she could easily complete Don's task, and confidently handed in the new work, but she did not expect to be unqualified.

"Don't you understand what the Golden Three Chapters are!? I'll explain it to you again! It is to appear in the first three chapters of the protagonist, contradictions, outbursts and goals, if necessary, the golden finger must also be written, all with only one purpose, that is, to make the reader happy! ”

"But if there's no foreshadowing," the elf girl whispered, "there's no story at all......

"There's no need for storytelling! Readers don't care what story they're telling, they're impatient! They just need to be cool! It's enough! ”

Donn slapped the table and yelled, "But look at what you wrote this? Yes? 'The morning light dispels the mist, the maiden walks on the waves, the goddess sends down a hymn, and evil will be purified'? Are you kidding me? Vernacular, do you understand the vernacular? ”

The beautiful elf poet shuddered, shook her head busily, and looked at Don with big watery eyes.

"From the point of view of the subject, you wrote the story of a heroine, and that alone has been killed!"

There are only these four sentences on the first page, judging by the style of writing. It's concise enough, but it's not rhythmic, and what about the main character's name? The protagonist rides on the waves. What is the purpose? What is the goddess going to do when she sends down the holy light? Hair goldfinger? Or is it a blessing? Or do you want to strengthen the main character's body? You didn't even write it clearly! And this last sentence, aren't you talking nonsense? Everyone knows that evil will definitely lose in the end, so readers don't care about this, they care about how the protagonist slaps his face, how to pretend to be forced, and how cool he is! ”

"Let me repeat these four sentences of yours in the right way. You feel it. ”

Tang En pondered for a moment, and under the gaze of the beautiful elf poet, he said slowly: "It's dawn." Our protagonist A wakes up at home on time, and then he quickly climbs to the window on the second floor, and the beautiful young girl next door B, who starts to take a shower as usual - depending on the age of the work, this paragraph can be further refined or simplified - after taking a shower. A flash of light fell from the sky. The goddess finds out that A is spying on her holy bath and therefore wants to punish him! ”

"But, who is A? He is the protagonist of the story! Therefore, the goddess has to kneel and lick when she comes! Under the attack of the protagonist's three-inch tongue, the goddess returned satisfied, and when she left, she also gave the protagonist A a gift package, which strengthened the power of the protagonist A, and then purified his body and taught some skills. Then the protagonist A is given a mission, and the evil Z is about to wake up. In order to save the world, he must take his childhood friend B on the road to save the world - why take B with him? As the protagonist, there is always someone to warm the bed when sleeping at night. ”

"Then,The protagonist went to find B.,But unexpectedly met the villain C who has been secretly in love with B.,C taunted the protagonist A.,Pull hatred hard.,And then A slapped C to death.,Successfully slapped in the face.,Harvest childhood sweetheart B.,And then take B to save the world together.,Started the road of exorcising evil.,Along the way, defeat the enemy D.,Conquer the beauty E,Defeat the enemy F,Accept the beauty G......"

Speaking of this, Tang En spread his hands: "Look, isn't it cool to write like this?" Also, in the vernacular! Do you understand the vernacular? It's just a flat and straight story, don't beat around the bush, and say anything. ”

"Oh......"

The beauty elf poet nodded as if he didn't understand: "In short, it is to defeat the enemy and collect beautiful women?" ”

"Understanding! What is your name? ”

Although she writes very ordinary, she is the first one who has the courage to come up and submit the manuscript, and she can be used as a key training object, so Tang En will work so hard.

"Daintrien."

“……”

Tang En was silent for a moment, and said in a serious tone: "If you have time, rummage through your bookshelves, maybe you will awaken some strange attributes." ”

Daintrian looked puzzled.

"Let's go back and change it, remember, our main audience is men, so we have to write this story from a male perspective, and as for the story from a female perspective, that's a matter for later."

What Isari wants is to increase the elven population, how can the population be increased if the men don't have the desire? At this time, of course, it is necessary to develop some literary works that can increase the desire for male possession, and Long Aotian, who has opened the stallion mode, is properly eligible!

"Oh......"

Daintellen hesitated for a moment and asked in a low voice, "Donne, the world you talked about before...... Are there any references? ”

Done's eyes lit up: "Are you interested?" ”

"Hmmm......"

Daintellen nodded: "I always feel that the story you are talking about is not a fictional story, it is very much like a real world, if there are references, if you play under that framework, I should be able to write a story that satisfies you." ”

"It's not to satisfy me, I'm just inspiring you."

Donn corrected her, "The stories you write are ultimately meant for Queen Isally to see. ”

After speaking, Tang En smiled again: "But it's a bit too embarrassing for you to directly ask you to write this kind of article, so ......"

Tang En waved his hand, took out a stack of paper, and said proudly: "This is the outline of the story I wrote for you last night, you can take it down and circulate it separately and study it." ”

"Great!"

Daintellan's eyes lit up, she took the outline, and said confidently: "Don't worry, in the name of the goddess, I will- I will definitely write this thing called a novel!" ”

"It's really teachable......"

Watching Daintrian leave, Don said, "Next." ”

A blonde elf girl handed in the manuscript with a confident face: "This is the caricature I drew." ”

"Oh."

Tang En just rolled his eyes and instantly took a breath of cold air: "What's your name?" ”

"Three-"

The corner of Don's eyes jumped, don't tell me her name is Sanqianyuan......

"Shamrock."

The elf girl Sanye happily pointed to the hair ornament on her head and said, "Because the seed that accompanied me left three leaves." ”

"Whew."

Tang En breathed a sigh of relief: "Sanye...... What the hell is that......"

"Huh?"

"You...... It's not called a comic ......."

Don En held the manuscript papers, his hands were trembling: "This is a sketch......"

The drafts that Sanye brought up,Storyboard,Storyboard,There is no problem with the rhythm,Except for the story still failed to jump out of Plandal's circle,The rest is impeccable,It can even be said that even if you get it on the earth,,You can instantly become a hit - because her painting is too scary!

This is not a cartoon at all, but a sketch!

Every character, every detail, every leaf of a tree, and even every grass in every grid can clearly see the veins on it!

It's already too realistic!

"Aren't you tired of drawing like this? How long did it take? ”

"I'm not tired, it won't be long, it's quite fast to use magic to improve it."

Sanye had a shallow smile on his face: "It's just the time for a meal, the main thing is that it takes a bit of time to conceive a story, but it's not too time-consuming to paint." ”

Found a treasure!

Don Eun was ecstatic in his heart, what is Kim Jung-gi on Earth!? This shamrock is simply a human flesh printer for Plandal!

"Great!"

Tang En grabbed his hands: "In addition to this style of painting, can you master other styles of painting?" Exaggerated? Funny and funny? Succinct? ”

Sanye is a little unsure: "It should be fine......"

"Good!"

Tang En finally saw hope: "In the future, the artist of the official book will decide that it will be you!" ”

Sanye was stunned for a moment: "What is the official book?" ”

"I'll tell you later."

Tang En smiled and patted Sanye on the shoulder: "In the future, the matter of conceiving the story will be left to someone else, all you have to do is draw the original manuscript, I believe Queen Isari and Egwin will be very happy to know your contribution." ”

"It's my pleasure."

After watching Sanye leave, Tang En rubbed his hands, a little impatient.

Judging from the current learning speed, they will still be bound by Purandal's inertial thinking in a short period of time, and it will be difficult for them to show their true strength, and if they want to come up with something that satisfies Isali, Don will have to do it himself.

However, he was not good at drawing or writing.

So Don had another idea.

The best way to see the results right away is to point them to the first work with their own hands, and then they will understand what the market needs are.

The outline that Tang En gave them before was the first step, and in the next step, Tang En decided to come up with a detailed outline, not only that, but there are some very ...... in it Well, adult things, anyway, are Isali's needs, and he doesn't have any psychological pressure to take them out, but when he thinks about cultivating those silly elf beauties to create these things, Don has an inexplicable sense of excitement.

What did he take out?

Of course, it is the sexual enlightenment teacher of many people on the earth, and they are all famous works, as long as the original framework is magically changed, and the heavy content is removed, some relatively milder adult works are born.

If words are not enough.,Sanye's ghost-like painter,The official book drawn is absolutely sharp.,Put together the awakening and stimulation of sex is self-evident.。

It is to be expected that these things will definitely stimulate the sexual needs of the elves in some way.

Of course, perhaps due to the innocence of the elves, they may awaken more slowly, but what Don has to do is to awaken their sexual consciousness step by step, as long as they begin to awaken, the rest of the matter has nothing to do with him. (To be continued.) )

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