Point question: I like this short story very much.
In fact, there are some small details, it is estimated that many people will not notice, for example, at the end, Su Mu asked Sanxin if he had a boyfriend, and the three-hearted girl said yes, of course she was a fool Su Shiyi, and the original dialogue behind it could be pointed out, but I didn't order it. Pen % fun % Pavilion www.biquge.info
It's better to be complete than to leave blank, fortunately I'm not a god of Inoue, although I also think that youth in reality is indeed imperfect, but in this story, I hope it is complete.
The story after the Dull Gua Su Eleven and the Three-Hearted Girl met again, in fact, there are two outlines, one is presented at the moment, and the other is afraid that it will take another 30,000 words to come out, so write it like this, of course, the plot is much more twisty, but there is no way, I am too lazy to write it again.
Again, it's better to leave blank than to be complete, and it's better to end here.
And then again, this is not urban life, after all, but monasticism. In fact, there is still foreshadowing, especially Lu Yu and Wu Anruo, who mentioned it a little and didn't elaborate. Su Mu and Chen Zhiang also have their own stories.
Su Shiyi, Chen Zhiang, Lu Yu, and Su Mu, originally planned to write four short stories of thirty or forty thousand words, intertwined with each other's lives, but they were independent, but now they can't be realized, or as mentioned earlier, after all, it is a cultivator, and Su Shiyi just wants Ye Feng to experience abuse.
Lao Tzu is right, Ye Feng has never encountered real abuse in his life, and this should have been his calamity.
To reveal one more thing, in the original outline, I was going to plan that after the three-hearted girl lost Pan Deng, Eleven would appear again, and I also wanted Eleven to hear the whole process, and think about it, it's really too abusive, and it's so difficult to write, let alone you. Therefore, it must be changed, thank you very much, I finally finished writing this volume, and I have some general experience. Besides, if you don't look closely, you can talk nonsense about green. Cap green. Hat trolls, I'm too lazy to pay attention to you, don't say I didn't write like this, even if I really wrote like this, I'm only sorry for the students who subscribed to the genuine version, you are not qualified! That's my attitude.
In addition, it is special to note that Su Shiyi and Gu Sanxin are inspired by Bi Thirteen and Gu Yixin in "Together in the Window", Su Shiyi and Bi Thirteen have similar personalities, and the three-hearted girl and Gu Yixin's classmates are completely different except for their consistent attitude towards love.
Speaking of which, I especially recommend this drama, we have slept together, hey, no, it is a very good drama to go through the window together, at first glance, I think Bi Thirteen is nothing, but after watching it again, I found that more than sixty percent of the laughter in this drama all come from this stupid cuteness, which is my favorite character.
And then reveal a small detail of the sadism, the classmate of Yinuo and Yixin Gu Yixin in the play slept with a scumbag boyfriend, and our god of study Bi 13 sat alone outside the hotel all night, thinking about it, I was stuffed for him.
Say it, everyone is stuffed with hearts, hearts.
In fact, I still want to do a similar 30,000-word experiment, but many people say that they can't stand it, don't like it, and can't help it.
Well, in fact, although there is still an idea, these are all things that Ye Feng must experience, but the results of the experiment are not very good, so there will only be one more, maybe he will change his mind in the future. Tolerate me for being presumptuous this time. Thanks to those brothers who support, if you don't like it, I don't know what to say except sorry.
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