Landlord:

Well, under everyone's friendly recommendation, I didn't resist the temptation, I ran to see it, and after reading it, I came to one conclusion: highly toxic, too white, too many gold fingers, and the villain is obviously mentally retarded. (《)

I won't talk about him in the first chapter of crossing, anyway, he comes and goes, and it's unrealistic to expect to write a reasonable crossing principle.

The second chapter started the college drama, and it didn't feel right at the time, this bridge was too vulgar, and it should have been forked at the time, and I regret it.

In the third chapter, he opened the golden finger and asked a student to persuade the siege to defeat the army, and he actually succeeded in persuading him, not paying attention to rationality at all, and it was highly poisonous!

At the beginning of the fourth chapter, the daughter of the archmage was posted upside down, and the research funds of the future father-in-law were collected with a shock to the tiger's body, and at a glance, I knew that the author was an otaku, and there was no emotional experience at all, and it was highly toxic!

Chapter 6 Beginning to be a librarian, can the current protagonist of the time travel not be a librarian? vulgar;

The first villain boss began to appear in Chapter 7, and then the identity was not surprising that it was the Grand Magister of the National Academy of Magic, forget it, pinch your nose and endure it;

Chapter 8 The protagonist began to join the secret society, and the author estimated that in order to attract white readers, he began to brush up on the protagonist's qualifications, and became one of the twelve leaders of this secret society as soon as he joined;

Not to mention the back, people who have never fought have pulled up hundreds of thousands of troops, beautiful bandits come to post upside down at critical moments, 10:1 battles between the enemy and our troops can be won, no money and no food but repeated victories, surrounded and intercepted by people and escaped unharmed, the most dangerous moment The enemy boss was actually killed by his own men, 600,000 to fight 800,000 can still win. The latest chapter of the Templar ("7*The whole book is an unreasonable collection.

I didn't look at it, and I made a fork decisively.

In the end, I just want to say to the author: YY is not your fault, excessive YY is your fault, and writing a book still has to talk about some minimum reasonableness.

2nd floor

You don't see the back. The most disgusting thing about this book is that the pig's foot has not completely unified the country, and there are bandits and even enemy remnants in many places, so he started training with the world's first military power, the first power is at the peak of winning the world war, the most sophisticated weapons and equipment, the army is huge, and he also pulled a little brother. Although the pig's foot army has received secret assistance from the world's second largest country (secretly aid can't be too much, just meaning), morale is also quite high, but can the flesh withstand steel? The author is writing about Saint Seiya fandom, right? Not a lot of words

It's rubbish, and I'm sorry that I've written so many words about this garbage

3rd floor

can't say the same, the author has also been entangled, playing with the abuse of the master, the base was ended by the villain, and the protagonist was also suppressed, and fled all the way.

As a result, readers didn't buy it, and subscriptions immediately declined.

4th floor

There is also a very bloody place in the back, sending his son to the battlefield for glory.

The author is addicted to self-abuse while opening his golden finger.

The little white writer is like this, and a lot of people follow suit.

5th floor

The early stage is too yy, and the end is too sadistic.

After the protagonist died, his wife was immediately shortened by the sofa, and most of the rules set before according to the advanced knowledge of the traverser were overturned, and decades later, even his name became a garbled code that could not be displayed.

This is embarrassing! This is a bad ending, right? There are many words, and I firmly refuse to admit that this book belongs to the normal finished book! ……，