I made several mistakes in writing this volume, which led to a big drop in subscriptions, the average drop of about 100, and the 24-hour follow-up dropped from 1700 to 1000, and many readers responded blandly and boring in the book friend group, which made me regret it.

If I could, I would have liked to tear down and rewrite this volume, but unfortunately because it's the Internet, it's almost impossible for this kind of thing.

Therefore, we can only sum up the lessons and strive not to make such mistakes again in the future.

The first mistake is the choice of the game.

The topic of 100,000 ancient soldiers versus 500 modern soldiers has often been seen on the Internet before, so I also have some thoughts on this, and to be honest, I'm not sure which side can win, so I wanted to write a copy of this and deduce it to see which side can win, it should be interesting.

When I thought about it, it was very simple, but when I wrote it, I found that I had to take care of too many things and too many details, and it was very difficult to write.

And the big scene is really hard to control.

The second mistake is the problem of perspective.

Generally, the perspective of the Internet will always be on the protagonist, so that readers can have a sense of suspense and expectation when they watch the protagonist continue to take risks, but because of the battle mode of this script, when I wrote it, I kept switching perspectives on both sides and introducing the tactics of both sides, resulting in the reader becoming a God's perspective, all the sense of suspense disappeared, and the story became a running account.

The third mistake is the problem of focus.

Normally, the focus of a book should be the main character.

But because of this dungeon setting, a lot of pen and ink is wasted on supporting characters and even NPCs, resulting in the protagonist having no sense of existence for a period of time in the middle, and readers probably lose their sense of substitution, which should also be one of the important reasons for the decline in subscriptions. This is handled very well in the Hungry Games volume, where the perspective is always on the main character.

In fact, the way to make up for it is very simple, remove the NPCs of both camps and replace them with the protagonist to command the expeditionary force, but unfortunately it was too late to wake up.

In the end, although the two commanders were killed, the protagonist came on the field and saved a little bit of reputation.

But on the whole, this volume is still unsatisfactory.

In the future, I will try to keep the perspective on the protagonist and avoid making similar mistakes again.

Well,That's probably it.,The next volume will choose a more interesting game.,I hope readers subscribe more.,Can pull up the catch-up.。