Kavin has nothing to do with the plot, it's this battle special, it's good to think about, it's hard to write, and everyone will understand when I write it.

When encountering similar situations, I always feel very irritable and want to talk to others.

Am I too weak.

Chatting with everyone, whether you like it or not, I can't help it

Let's talk about Shanjun and Shizi, the focus is on Yuan Chaonian, this thorn has stuck me for several days, and I have to spit it out.

In the setting of forging immortals, Shanjun is a very important part, and there are people at the same level as Jinwu, four-legged, Nirzu, etc., and the plot weight is lighter than the other, and it is not too much to say that they play soy sauce.

It's about the plot, and the balance. These guys have become a joke to destroy the world with one claw, and the protagonist plays with hair.

Shanjun is the only existence in the True Spirit Level (slightly weaker, it doesn't matter), and his strength is too strong compared to Canglang, so he must choose a spokesperson.

There was no problem with the setting, but there was a lot of trouble in the actual operation.

Thirty-seven sons under the mountain monarch's door, the tiger sister-in-law is the introduction, the big gray is in-depth, the thirteen mothers are hooked, and the top ten are the focus.

One or eight leads to heaven and earth, two or seven bewitch the world, three or six have no way to go, four or five murderous plots of military disaster, ten sons travel the world to arrange appearances, line distribution, grievances and so on are generally good, unfortunately there are too many people, it is difficult to control, and there are many problems.

For example, the three sons and six sons are involved in the main line of this book, and the strength of the three sons is obviously weak, and the six sons simply played soy sauce (at that time, the focus had shifted to the Lin family ancestor, Nirvana, and Miaomiao, and it was not allowed to write too much about the six sons.

The two sons and seven sons are better overall, but unfortunately the most important scene (the decisive battle) can't be written, and the color is directly reduced by three percent.

One-eighteen, four-five is good, all kinds are good, well, I haven't written it to the end, so I won't talk about it.

The main thing is Yuan Chaonian, as mentioned earlier, when I wrote about the end, I found that his body was missing a waist.

The head of the Ten Sons (the part of the Taoist Temple) is very good, and the image should be said to be very full, but the breasts are not strong enough (the death of Mr. Big), and then I wrote this, and I realized that the Ten Sons had no waist at all, and now I had to draw his feet, and then I had to go into the earth for peace!

The ten sons traveled the world, Yuan Chaonian's background, experience, personality, exercises, and human nature were distorted, all kinds of good, all kinds of suitable, and the most critical time was a handy

I thought about it, but I didn't do it.

Now to extend the scene for him is to cover up another mistake with one mistake, and the more wrong it is, the more outrageous it becomes. The following plot, Autumn Hunting and Daoyuan, all kinds of big guys and old guys are going to appear, compact and tight, there is really no place for him to intervene, and it is hard to really get it.

Since it is written here, the force that should be used must be used, and what should be shown must be indicated. Therefore, some book friends think that Yuan Chaonian's results are hard, and I think so.

Compared with Yuan Chaonian, Yelian's transformation is very normal, provided that the time is changed and the current plot is substituted from time, and you can understand why she will have an emotional breakdown. And as far as I'm concerned, a very important part of the creation of the character of Yelian is to write about the process of the goddess becoming a human.

The Blood Dance family has entrusted me with a lot of private goods.

Well, the nagging is over, the word count has arrived, and it's much more comfortable.

Old guns. (To be continued......)