Say goodbye
Usually, I try not to let the protagonist go through life and death, because it's really hard to write.
Without the presence of the protagonist, it doesn't matter too much to write shallow and deep, write well or badly, and it's completely different with a protagonist.
In economics it's called risk aversion, well, that's my.
But then again, it's not a problem to always keep the protagonist present, and you must think so too.
Say goodbye.
In the story of forging immortals, Gu Xi is an ordinary old man, and he is very average in all aspects. For example, cultivation, such as qualifications, such as achievements, and scheming, as for fighting, there has never been a battle.
Gu Xi's position in my heart is not even as good as the tiger sister-in-law, he can't fight, he can't fight wits, his personality is paranoid and irritable, and he is a little weak. He didn't dare to love if he had love, he couldn't use love if he had love, he wanted to break through what his predecessors couldn't, but he didn't succeed until he died, he wanted to do something for the Taoist Academy, and he ended up taking his life
In this way, Gu Xi compared with Mr. Big, Jian Zun did not lose a single defeat in his life, and Gu Xi did not win once when he was dying, not once.
Such a person, of course, I chose to focus on a description of some intentions, ordinary people ordinary things, the life and death of immortals and mortals are life and death, when writing, try to choose ordinary sentences, this is a little bit of my thoughts.
It needs to be mentioned that when designing the plot, especially the picture, I never rejected stealing victory from the classic passages of my predecessors, sending Guxi obviously has the shadow of Sister Pingping, and the last line is untouched, because I can't think of a better and more powerful word.
Of course, Gu Xi and Sister Pingping are completely two people, and the reasons and mentality when they left that world are completely different, I believe it will not cause misunderstanding. Thirteen Lang and Fan Xian are also two people, and when I was writing (at least in this part), I paid special attention to emphasizing one point: Thirteen Ye is a person who will never compromise, any situation (this will be proven in the future, well, I hope everyone will not scold me when the time comes).
So,In the end, it's like this.,As for the effect,I can only say that I tried my best.,The first two chapters and the next few chapters.,Each chapter takes more than five hours to talk about it and complain about it again.,It's really hard to save the manuscript.,There's some.,But it's much less than Ji Lu's plan.,The reason is that it's just in time to catch up with this part of the Taoist Academy.,I really can't make a mistake in writing.。
Okay, let's not talk about it, everyone will praise it when they are happy, cry when they are sad, and beat me up if they are sad, but they can't scold
Again, I have never been a good-natured author, and whoever dares to scold me, I will never forgive him in my life.
That's it, I wish you all a happy reading, and I would like to advise you as usual: Come to me in August!
Old guns
(To be continued......)