Revision of the text about the heroine
There have always been readers who have reacted to the appearance of the heroine, so this time the author spent a lot of time to change the previous plot about the heroine, so that the writing is more smooth and natural, and the plot is smoother, but the general direction has not changed.
Interested readers can look back, and if you have comments or construction, you can tell me.
To be honest, looking at the text written more than a year ago, the author has a kind of ...... I don't know where to start with the shame.
It's just a year, and now that I look at it, some places are still a little immature, ha, haha~ (awkward laughter)
PS: Please let those short-tempered readers see clearly, the content changed is only part of the paragraphs, so that the design is clearer, the writing is smoother, it does not affect the direction of the plot, and there is no meaning that will be written around the heroine in the future. There is also a limit to the author's ability to listen to the opinions of readers, and if this book caters to readers everywhere, the protagonist may have opened his harem and killed people a long time ago. It's really hard to make up for the brain.
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