PS: Seeing that the point of everyone's discussion is completely off, resend the single chapter, and the update is already on the way......

Some of the details have been modified in the previous chapter, and the deceptive words of longevity to the old man have been slightly changed, if there is a dissatisfaction with the reader, the author apologizes here, there is a problem with the writing technique here, and the words are mishandled, and the follow-up will pay attention to this kind of details, bow and apologize.

Some readers reported disrespect for feelings;

First of all, Li Changshou is not a perfect character, from the very beginning of this article, he has a lot of crooked reasoning, which is not in line with the positive mainstream view.

The fox girl's feelings, in his opinion, are just an accident and unnecessary cause and effect, and when you cut it, you will cut it.

If it weren't for the author's forcible use of the fox girl's background to persuade longevity, it would have been possible for her to have longevity directly, but fortunately persuaded her.

Secondly, there should be no problems with the writing of these two chapters, that is, trouble, resolution, and follow-up story lines.

I read it all through the review, and the problem is in two parts.

First, the reader has empathy for the fox girl;

This blame author, in order to make a laugh, portrays the image of the fox girl too simply, and doesn't want to put too much ink on her, which leads to the impression that the reader is a 'beautiful infatuated girl', which can be sympathized.

The author apologizes solemnly here, but this is not a writing error, right, because the outline requires that the fox girl must have this image......

Second, ', don't send the woman to the door, teach me someone to speak rudely.' ’

I won't explain much about this, Li Changshou has his own ideas......

[Here is the content of the previous chapter]:

The reader looked a little puzzled, and there were a few points in the implementation text that were not clearly pointed out, because he wanted everyone to reminisce......

But it seems that many readers didn't get it.

First of all, characters in a book that are longer than two pages are useful.

Let's talk about the red line issue first.

1, why is the red rope wrapped around Qi Yuan instead of Li Changshou.

Answer: Because this is implying that the fox girl is in love with a figurative image, rather than really falling in love with the man who appeared in front of her at that time.

When Li Changshou saw this, he came to the conclusion that you were just lonely later.

Qi Yuan Lao Dao does not have a thread corresponding to the fox demon's red rope, this is because Qi Yuan himself has no intersection with the fox demon.

If the fox girl really fell in love with the man who appeared in front of her, the red line was to find Li Changshou.

2. Is the fox girl's feelings sincere?

A: In her own eyes, she is sincere, and extremely sincere.

But from the perspective of Li Changshou, it should need to be confirmed.

3. The old man breaks the marriage and does not respect the emotional problem.

The image of Yue Lao is actually the concretization of the feelings of the world in the book, reflecting the force majeure in reality.

The feelings in the book can make Yue Lao regress, like Bian Zhuang's twelve years of bitter love, which is the best proof. At that time, Yue Lao wanted to arrange a golden and jade relationship for Bian Zhuang.

In reality, as long as two people are firm enough, they can overcome all difficulties, but the book is more idealistic.

If you want to discuss the relationship between men and women in reality, and talk about pure love without reality, it is immature, and the author cannot guide this aspect.

4. The issue of the red line.

Yunxiao is a congenital soul, cultivated to be extraordinary, jumping out of the Three Realms, not in the Five Elements, so it is not affected by the Marriage Palace.

Otherwise, the archmage would definitely ......

5. The identity of the fox demon.

The next chapter will be revealed, this time Li Changshou is equivalent to preaching, and the update is already on the way.

It's lonely~