A must-see! Revision and summary of the parts of the book
wrote almost a million words, and under the sharp eyes of all book friends, Xiao Mo saw a lot of problems in the book. Pen, fun, pavilion www. biquge。 info
Therefore, two days ago, I cheekily asked the editor Long Da for permission, and in the past two days, I didn't dare to sleep to revise some of the problems in the book, and now that the revision is complete, I feel obligated and responsible to tell the book friends and let everyone know what has been changed.
First:
It's the first dozens of chapters of the book, no wonder everyone scolds the IQ for not being online, Xiao Mo just wrote the book at that time, and what he wrote is really miserable when he looks back now.
Therefore, some of the words that are too white have been changed slightly, not much!
Second:
It's a problem with the protagonist's cultivation of exercises.
Blame me for being careless at the beginning, I didn't write it clearly to you, the exercises practiced by the protagonist are the eight or nine mystical skills that I learned from Yuan Hong, and at the same time, this is still a magical power that can change in the wind.
Note: Eight or nine Xuangong
It is not only a method, but also a supernatural power!
It is not only a method, but also a supernatural power!
It is not only a method, but also a supernatural power!
Important things must be said three times.
Also, the eight or nine Xuangong is obviously the cultivation method of the Daomen, I don't know where you see it and say that it is the Buddha's door, if you have to say yes, then in this book it is neither the Tao nor the Buddha's!
Third:
The protagonist's first encounter with the Three Virgins at the South Heavenly Gate, and the second time the protagonist went to Huashan, it was changed.
No way, emotional problems, because Xiao Mo has never eaten pork, and he doesn't see any doorway when he watches pigs run every day, so he bothers to write about this kind of first love or something, and it finally feels less embarrassing after this change.
Fourth:
Let's talk about the distinction between immortals.
There are two kinds of gods, one is the innate god who is born and is extraordinary, and the other is the god of incense who was enshrined after the Great War of the Gods.
The innate god has unlimited potential and the cultivation speed is extremely fast, and the incense fire god was damaged in the god war, and it is difficult to cultivate an inch, and the true spirit of the original god is also included in the god list, and the god list is controlled by the Jade Emperor, so their life and death are also in the hands of the Jade Emperor.
It's just that most of the people on the list of gods are in the sect, and they have the support of the Tongtian Sect Master, so most of their orders to the Jade Emperor are in disobedience, and even if they are forced to work, they will not contribute, and the Jade Emperor can only turn a blind eye to them because of the Tongtian Sect Master.
Finally, I would like to summarize the situation in the book:
"One" male protagonist: Shepherd Changsheng
Identity: Demon God (abandoned) Qiankun Daoist (Devil)
Cultivation method: Eight or nine Xuangong, sanctification of the flesh (just obtained)
Cultivating supernatural powers: lion's roar, red lotus karmic fire, immortal body
Sun True Fire (to be practiced) Tiangang 36 changes (not practiced)
Seventy-two changes of earth shatter (not fully practiced)
Magic Weapon: Qiankun Diagram, Chaos Clock, TBD——
Teacher: Bodhi Patriarch, Yuan Hong
Sworn brothers: Gao Ming Gao Jue, Sun Wukong
Personality: Bright, gracious, affectionate and righteous
After experiencing the changes in the heavenly court, his mind began to change to the devil
"Two" heroine
Okay, I originally wanted to learn from Wei Xiaobao to prepare seven, but I was afraid that my pen power was limited and I couldn't control too many heroines, and I couldn't write the character of the heroine.
Second, I can't stand everyone's persuasion, so I can only reluctantly remove two of them, and as for the remaining five, which have sunk to the bottom, they are bound to the outline and future plots, and they can't be missing
"Three" opposites: Buddhism, Heaven
There is no absolute right or wrong in this book, and the opposition is only due to the difference in their positions and interests
The protagonist's current intentions:
Become a big demon king on the road to the west, planning and calculating the journey to the west
Helper: Xingtian
Well, that's about it.
Then comes a game between Heavenly Court, Buddhism, Taoism, Demon World, and the protagonist. . .
I write with sincerity, even if I stay up until three or four o'clock at night, as long as I am not satisfied, I will not send it, and I will read it from the perspective of a reader to see if there are any problems.
I believe in a sentence that if I treat others with sincerity, they will treat me with sincerity.
I would like to thank you at the starting point, in the genesis, on the major platforms to support the genuine version, to support Xiao Mo's friends, for those who watch piracy......
Xiao Mo also understands, but understanding does not mean support.
After all, Xiao Mo writes slowly, a chapter takes two or three hours, and two chapters are written until three or four o'clock in the morning, in fact, it is not easy, if you can, Xiao Mo still hopes that everyone can come to the starting point and give Xiao Mo a genuine subscription.
A chapter is almost a dime, small Mo is not trying to be more, not trying to be fast, almost two chapters a day, two cents a day, ten days is two dollars, and a month is six yuan......
Forget it, it's not interesting to talk too much.
In a word, Xiao Mo still hopes that everyone will support me, well, I feel so thick-skinned when I say this.
Xiao Mo didn't write well at first, but after writing for so long, I feel that it is much better now than before, and in the next plot, Xiao Mo believes that he will write better little by little!
Finally, I would like to say sincerely, thank you to the friends who support Xiao Mo, Xiao Mo is waiting for the Chinese at the starting point...... Everyone who is willing to come!