Finally, it's time for the afterword.

At this time, I always feel a burst of prostration, I have a lot of things to say but I don't feel the strength to say it, and the postscript in the past is not long, a thousand words.

This one is especially tiring because it is the longest to write......

It's like running a marathon, the first half is always simpler, and the more you get to the second half, the more tired you are, every extra meter is tired, and this book has a million more words...... I really admire those macho men who can write millions of dollars, it's amazing.

I just can't do it, I just want to rest.

Anyway, this book is indeed my best grade...... Some people say that it is not as good as Spring and Autumn, and some people say that it is better than Spring and Autumn, anyway, they have their own tastes, and there is no need to dispute this, but I am not very satisfied with myself.

It's not that there is a problem with the writing, but the main thing is that it's not the story I originally wanted to write.

In fact, this book cannot be regarded as an upgrade stream in the true sense of the word, it is actually a travelogue.

As soon as these two words came out, I don't know if many people will suddenly realize: I see.

Before, many people said that they couldn't see the main line, and indeed the main line is not very obvious, because the main line is to explore the world. Shenzhou, Netherworld, Great Wilderness, East China Sea, North Hades, Celestial Realm. Everywhere I went, I would describe the local customs, construct a three-dimensional world, and then finally form Qin Yi's harvest, and the inextricable lines were kneaded into the final creation, which is the real main line.

Collecting materials for Bangbang's body is just a story line on the surface.

It's not an upgrade or a monster, so there's not a lot of fighting, and it's not much to render, because what you want to write isn't there.

Although it is a travelogue, it must have a story to become a book. What was the original story...... In fact, Qin Yi was just a clue to witness, to observe the stories of everyone in every place.

The original plan was to have many independent supporting character stories similar to Li Qinglin, such as Electric Mouse, Jing Ze, Honka Jushi and Ye Beiqing, Yu Zhenren's infatuation, Sadness and Crane Mourning's good and evil and grand wishes, and Tianjizi's conspiracy...... They all want to expand to write independent stories.

For example, in the end, Yu Zhenren, if you add more pen and ink to foreshadow, write a little bit of the story of him and his wife, and finally come to some memories to kill, set off, that kind of artistic conception and emotion will definitely be stronger than now.

But everyone doesn't like to watch it, there is a high probability that in the process of foreshadowing, there will be an overwhelming number of people who scold me for supporting roles.

The test field in the first volume told me that I couldn't write like that.

As we all know, the style of the first volume is very different from the later one, and the reason has been said, because the first volume is not only scolded but also has bad grades - even now, every time the starting point is recommended, the recommendation effect is at the bottom in the same period, because the initial persuasion is serious.

The old readers who trust me very much have a bunch of people who can't stand it, not to mention new readers, and the retention rate is very low.

Because it's slow to heat, and it's not a cool feeling. There is a complete deviation in reading expectations.

At that time, many people felt that the protagonist's brilliance was overpowered by Li Qinglin, and the expected reading goal was to see when the protagonist slapped Li Qinglin in the face......

This kind of reading expectation left me speechless, and I didn't match the channel at all, so you can imagine the impression......

In addition, there are many points, such as the recklessness of Qingjun in the early days, the awesome coaxing in the early days of Minghe, the sense of "green tea" in the early days of Cheng Cheng, and the "dog blood" and "entanglement" and so on.

Until a fire, everyone found that the overall meaning of this volume is actually just a story, not a slap in the face, nor a bloody abuse, just a simple story to tell, everything in the previous text is just foreshadowing, so I feel a little taste in retrospect...... At this time, the whole volume of word-of-mouth was pulled back, but it was too late, and those who left couldn't come back, they couldn't see here.

This is a situation where the long-term foreshadowing writing is incompatible with today's online reading expectations, at least my "godhead" is not enough to support people's patience, I'm afraid it will take to the level of the squid beacon, I am indeed much worse.

So I had to start adjusting the way I wrote it.

The outline story as a whole has not changed, but the way of expression and writing has changed, which is actually a matter of pen and ink emphasis. Just like the embodiment of the first volume's focus on Li Qinglin, it was all reduced and focused on Qin Yi himself and his women. Where it should be "pressed", I don't press it, and if there are no twists and turns, there will be no twists and turns, after all, hard writing is not for scolding.

The small city lewd temple meets Jingze, which is the last style transition point, until the first time I met the senior sister, and also continued part of the artistic conception.

The plot has not changed since then, but the direction of focus has changed. The tone has also changed from a little heavy thinking to a lot of humor.

Some people say that it's boring to watch, the supporting roles are tasteless, there are too many emotional scenes, the stalks are too heavy, I prefer the early stage, etc., but it turns out that in fact, this is what most people want to watch, because the results have really improved after changing the pen and ink, and doubled up.

In fact...... As long as you don't write the plot part of the male and female protagonist's emotional drama, pay attention to any plot part, there will definitely be the same impatience as the first volume, and some even can't wait for the next chapter to explain and start criticizing. A slight setback doesn't even need a setback, as long as the villain profits, a group of aggrieved parties appear.

What's more, there are a large number of readers who hate water when they follow the main line decryption, and I am quite convinced.

But once you write a male and female play, there is basically nothing, and everyone is happy.

What everyone likes, it goes without saying.

Since you don't want to read supporting character stories, then don't write supporting character stories, it's very simple.

Some people may say that after all, it is a small part of those who can speak, and they cannot be influenced...... But I can ignore the comments, but I can't ignore the data.

The male and female protagonists' scene subscription data,It's a big cut more than any other plot subscription data.,It's better to scold the people who skip the book.,You can scold in the chapter of the day, but you didn't jump the book.,Right?。

Some people say it's too heavy, but the excitement of each chapter comes from this.

It's everyone's choice.

Perhaps it is also the inevitable evolution after the appearance of the chapter theory. Now on the starting point list, the sand sculpture style has begun to occupy an increasing proportion, which is the reason.

In the end, it became the current "Asking the Red Dust".

Say I cater to readers, I do cater to readers, because I have to eat......

If you feel disappointed and leave, you can only say sorry, although you can't see the postscript when you leave......

Of course, the existing writing style is not bad, the fact is that the audience is wider and more people like it, and many people can see their aunt laugh and be happy, and I am also happy, which is very good. I changed the style, it was originally for this, and it was easy to have fun.

The plot is still the outline of the original plot direction.,The overall structure is still quite high.,One round after another,One foreshadowing after another.,I'm personally satisfied.,For a daily online article.,I'm quite accomplished to be able to do this.。

It's just that it's not the original intention after all, and it's a bit regrettable.

In the end, he left a volume, proving that Ji Cha didn't only write emotional dramas and girls, and he was "here".

These words are to summarize the writing process of this book, there is no substance, and it is not to blame anyone, and the current question is as good as Hongchen.

Anyway, the online article is mainly based on the public's preference after all, and when I don't need to think about eating, I can slowly write the story I want.

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The second thing I want to say is an appeal to the current harem text, and I hope everyone will be more tolerant of the already difficult harem text.

I don't really want to talk about it, I'm tired after talking about it for so long. I hope these brothers know that their own stabbing really hurt the author more than the damage of the defenders to report the party. Because the author knows what those people will scold, but he doesn't know which sentence he wrote.

I can't spend three or five times as much brain power, and every time I write a sentence, I have to consider whether this mount will be sprayed, whether the two balls squatting together will cause anyone's discomfort, and whether it is thunder to write a myth of a prison cow around the piano......

As for it?

I really don't have the brainpower to deal with these things that normal people don't need to think about at all, so people can't write at all, and they are at a loss.

I don't want to say much about this, let's say something normal.

I said in an interview before that the harem party doesn't have high requirements for works, as long as the girl writes well, many others can be forgiven.

I don't think it anymore.

As mentioned earlier, whatever the plot, the reasonable party logic party suffocates the party one by one, and the requirements are not lower than that of a single woman and no female works.

The requirements for the plot are not low, but the requirements for the characters are hundreds of times that of them.

I rarely see character portrayal requirements in heroineless texts, but harem texts ...... Don't mention the portrayal of the heroine, and often ask for the portrayal of the supporting role, and you don't watch the portrayal of the supporting role, and ask for ...... Anyway, everything is going to a high standard, and it doesn't matter if it's just a daily online article, not a masterpiece.

There are some requirements that are really not even up to the standards of famous books.

For example, the heroine can't have a vase, and if there is one, she will be criticized. I think that Jin Yong has a vase Zeng Rou, and no one asks all the characters to be colorful, and when it comes to the harem, the online article not only requires the female characters to be brilliant, but even the electric mouse is just a tool man, and some people are not satisfied, saying that they can only write women, and it is not enough to portray the characters...... I really don't understand how this request came about.

Isn't the heroine not a character? Others portraying a few supporting roles without a heroine is a group portrait, we portray more than a dozen female characters, and if there is no pen and ink for the supporting actors, it is equivalent to not portraying the characters?

There is also a requirement that the heroine cannot be hidden from everyone in the later stage. I wonder if even Shi Jin and Wu Song, who were rich and colorful in the early stage of the Water Margin, didn't perform much in the later stage, how did they get to a mere harem online article and actually require the characters in the early stage to be as wonderful as in the later stage?

There are so many characters, whether it is male or female, after the wonderful paragraphs are over, they will naturally not continue to shine, isn't it common sense?

We are really just writing online articles of a few thousand words a day, not writing something beyond the famous books, and it is impossible to have that level.

Can you not mention some requirements that go beyond the limits of human beings?

Now that the harem is so difficult to walk, not only is it not tolerant, but it is becoming more and more harsh, I really think it's very strange.

Let's call for a little more tolerance and peace......

Well...... It didn't make much sense, and no one listened to my appeal. Some people say that I am carrying the flag in the harem, I am busy and hurry to remove the flag, I really can't afford it, when I am reported, I am as dazzling as a target, and I hold a magnifying glass when I am demanding, but my grades are several times lower than others' muffled eating.

There is a buddy in the quagmire who said that the newspaper seller is now going to carry the flag, hurry up and take it, thank you, thank you, good man, my pen power is really not good, or let the newspaper seller with pen power bear this heavy honor.

I didn't expect that this time, the afterword was more than the number of words in the main section...... It's been too long...... Ahem, the negative energy is too heavy, and it's not good.

I am still sincerely grateful to most of the brothers who are still supporting Liding, otherwise I would have hung up a long time ago.

Now I'm going to take a break......

In the past, when I worked part-time, I took a break for half a year, but now I can't be so capricious when I have to eat full-time...... This time there will be a break of about two or three months (including the time for the construction of the new book), and the next book will be in September at the earliest, and in mid-October at the latest, which is more likely to be October.

Still trust my brothers...... See you or leave you.