The first draft of the 072 script

"Oh, I did get fat. Ji Danhuang nodded, "But...... What are you doing here?" pointed his hand, pointing to the pair of nails on the nine-tails' feet and hating the sky.

Nine-Tails smiled: "I'm here to practice dancing! In a few days, I'm going to sign up for the eleven elite competition, and I'm going to dance in the clothes of Hatsune Dragonhoof, just like this." As he spoke, he twisted his waist and came to an extremely charming posture.

The corners of Ji Danhuang's mouth suddenly twitched like convulsions, and the whole person was not good. He admits that the Nine-Tails is really incomparable, and when he looks at it so closely, he is hit at once.

It's so scary! Only such a terrifying sao can attract bursts of screams from the audience.

Ji Danhuang calmed down, ↑ansh⊕uba.his own feelings, took a deep breath and said: "Okay, you continue to practice, come on." ”

Nine-tails can be regarded as a talent!

are all members of an animation club.,When you meet it, you naturally exercise and play together.。 During the break, Lian Yunu took out the first draft of the script he had just written, and asked everyone to take a look at it and give some comments by the way.

When you open the script, the first thing that appears is the bitmap. Since the leaders of the two camps have to play, and they each bring people, the script design is a two-line direction, one line is the Valley of the Wicked, and the other line is the Haoqi Alliance.

The previous plots are carried out separately, briefly showing the general story background of the two sides, as well as the battle preparations of the eight major factions under both sides. Immediately in the middle of the transition, the Valley of the Wicked and the Haoqi Alliance went to war, and this part was more complicated. Lian Yunu's design was to create a battlefield effect, with the leaders of both sides directing the battle on the second-floor platform, and the eight major factions fighting below.

"This place of battle, it feels a little messy!" Lina pointed to the character movement map on the script, "Look, the eight major factions below are fighting in a mess, and the command from above can't tell who is who!"

"I think it's messy here. "Nine-Tails Road. "This place should be changed so that everyone has a chance to show up, so that the stage effect of chaos is really not very good. ”

Just imagine, seventeen people stand on the second-floor platform, and the remaining thirty or so people beat each other offstage, this is a mess!

Wuji said: "Otherwise, this place will be replaced by a catwalk." If you walk the catwalk, it doesn't look so messy. ”

"No, I can't. Ji Danhuang immediately dismissed the mention of yì, "There was originally a catwalk at the end, but if you change this place to a catwalk, the ending will be repeated." This place. Let's focus on the plot. The design of the octaws is actually not bad, as long as the position is arranged, it can also be brilliant. For example, melee classes face each other in the middle and form a circle of back and forth, while ranged classes move in the back circle with fifty or seventy thousand in the middle. And then ......" said this, but could not go on.

This kind of design is actually not good. If the fight part is arranged. It can be brilliant, but this part is really not easy to do. The trouble is not the action, but how to move and not be chaotic!

"Or else. Yin Yuechan interjected, "Just like the president said." Form a circle, the outermost is melee, so that when the two circles collide, the melee fights, and the three sects of Tiance, Tibetan Sword, and Shaolin just form a triangle. After the melee is over, it is the circle of Chunyang and Tangmen. Remote amplification moves. Finally, there is a treatment circle of fifty or seventy thousand. First of all, the melee circle is hand-to-hand, and the seriously injured crouch down. In the front row, followed by a long-range circle battle, wounded and squatting, also turned into a row, and finally 570,000 collectively added blood, pulled up the melee range, changed the formation, and formed a state of confrontation. In this way, the Seven Stars and Ten Evils came down from the second floor of the platform and fought at the front, while the remaining eight major sects retreated behind them as a background, showing the effect of sending troops to the desert. What do you think of that?"

Ji Danhuang heard this and conceived the scene in his mind. Both sides are three concentric circles, appearing layer by layer like peeling an onion, melee has blades to connect, and long-range direct mutual magnification moves, so it looks like it's actually quite layered, and it respects the move setting, which is not bad.

In the back, the Seven Stars and Ten Evils came down from the second-floor platform and fought in front, and the Eight Great Sects created effects in the back. At this time, the Seven Stars and Ten Evils can divide a few more small plots, let them come to the stage to perform a plot a few times, and the rest of them can not be in front of them to set up a circle in the middle as a background, which is not bad.

Not...... In this case, it seems that the stage is not wide enough to be opened! Then change it again, the seven stars and ten evils in front are a circle, and the small theater turns to take turns, so it should be enough.

Ji Danhuang said these thoughts again, and everyone discussed and made some changes slightly, and then finalized this part. After that, it is the sensational bridge of the eight major factions dying on the battlefield, and when it is over, it is the end of the catwalk, and there is nothing left.

After going through the plot from beginning to end, everyone began to correct some details, fill in some more meaningful content, and delete some chicken ribs to make the script more perfect. After the discussion, everyone went to the rehearsal room to try the feeling on the stage, and changed the inappropriate places until it was preliminarily determined that there was no problem, and then they gave up.

In this way, the discussion lasted until three o'clock in the afternoon, and everyone was a little hungry. This script was discussed at ten o'clock, and everyone forgot about eating when they chatted. Now, when everyone was done, the hungry stomachs began to protest strongly, and everyone went downstairs to eat cold noodles with a smile before going home.

Although Ji Danhuang said that he no longer worries about the stage, in fact, he is still very concerned about this matter, and now his mind is full of problems with the script, constantly sketching the scene design plot in his mind, checking and filling in the gaps. Everyone else happily played the game, but he still popped up from time to time to ask everyone if it was appropriate to change it like this.

At first, everyone replied to him with two sentences, but gradually they ignored him, so he had to write down his thoughts in a notebook first, and then discuss them after they were done.

In this way, Ji Danhuang was completely excluded by everyone who was happy to play the game.

Bore, Ji Danhuang remembered that he seemed to be looking for Ji Hongguang to guide him in cultivating demons, so he came to the door of the room prepared for Ji Hongguang and Jiang Yusheng and tried to knock.

Originally, Ji Danhuang just tried to knock twice, and he didn't expect Ji Hongguang and Jiang Yusheng to be there in the fairy couple who saw the beginning and the end of the dragon, but he didn't expect that the door of this room was really knocked open by him!

I'm gone! This little couple is still there! It's amazing! It's so strange! He thought they were traveling all over the world again! (To be continued......)