Chapter 168: Teach you how to write a novel
"Well, I remember that." Guo Jinzhang nodded.
"The second point, this one is more important." Jiang Feng continued, "Before, I said that the first three chapters of the online novel should get to the point, and for novices, it may be clear at all. However, if he didn't order, he certainly wouldn't have thought of it. It's not very important, but it leads him to the right path. Once you enter the doorway, it is more important to write the text. This is related to the question of whether your novel can be popular. ”
"I took a look, your entire Xianxia cultivation system is basically exactly the same as the Ethereal Journey, but you are too orthodox. The so-called, the first one who uses the cultivation system is a genius, the second one is a smart person, the third one is an ordinary person, and the nth person uses it, and it doesn't reach the average height in the plot, and it's estimated that it's going to be finished. Secondly, in the process of writing, you only want the protagonist to ascend to the top step by step, and you don't even want to use cheating methods, so that after your tenth chapter, including the first thirty chapters, you are still practicing there...... In the end, I didn't cultivate anything. Together with the disciple brothers, they didn't win either. ”
The protagonist is abused, and when the reader sees it, he feels that he is being abused. The protagonist was abused, and Ben was fine. After all, there are a lot of people who can break out in abuse. However, Guo Jinzhang's this, after being abused, did not break out at all, it was simply abused. Because, what he wrote is completely too orthodox, if you want to take revenge, I don't know what year Ma Yue.
After saying so much, Jiang Feng looked at Guo Jinzhang, but this guy didn't react.
"Well, actually, I'm talking about Goldfinger." Jiang Feng had no choice but to explain to Guo Jinzhang.
To put it bluntly, it is the golden finger in online novels. If there is no goldfinger, the web novel will generally have to pounce. Like rebirth and the like, his golden finger is a prophet of all things to come. Including many historical novels that travel to history, and know the direction of history clearly. A large number of people traveled to the Tang Dynasty and snatched Li Bai's poems and wrote their own font names.
"Yours is a Xianxia novel, and moreover, it's a classical Xianxia. As a modern person, you travel to this completely strange world of Xianxia. Well, crossing is useless for you at all. Because, judging from your style, you haven't seen the knowledge of modern society fused with the exercises of this Xianxia world. Your protagonist is still completely step by step, constantly practicing. I want to ask again, why do you have to cross so hard. At the beginning, he lived directly in this Xianxia world, and then, when he entered the Xianmen, it would be over. Just like Xiao Ding's "Zhu Xian", he has no ......fun at all."
""Zhu Xian" doesn't have a golden finger."
At this time, Guo Jinzhang took his book and compared it with "Zhu Xian". Guo Jinzhang wrote this novel, and he should have been influenced by Zhu Xian. Moreover, Guo Jinzhang likes the surname of Zhang Xiaofan, the protagonist of "Zhu Xian". Then it has been under the big bamboo peak, keep working hard, and slowly achieve. So, his novels also follow this system, only letting the protagonist slowly cultivate and finally step to the top.
"Who said that "Zhu Xian" doesn't have a golden finger?"
It seems that Guo Jinzhang's understanding of Goldfinger is too one-sided. But it's okay, with Jiang Feng, a theoretical master, by his side, he is in charge of stuffing all the online novel routines into his brain.
"Zhang Xiaofan, one person cultivates two schools of kung fu, isn't it a golden finger? Zhang Xiaofan's cup is a treasure soul devouring stick, isn't it a golden finger. For another example, Zhang Xiaofan has learned the 'Book of Heaven', the highest Dao method in this immortal cultivation world, isn't it a golden finger? ”
Goldfinger doesn't have to be reborn, it doesn't have to be crossed, in fact, to put it bluntly, it is to give the protagonist a means of cheating. Just like in Jin Yong's novels, there are actually golden fingers. Like Guo Jing worshiped a powerful master, and learned the Nine Yin True Scripture, it is completely a golden finger. You let him practice the martial arts of the Quanzhen Sect every day, with Guo Jing's qualifications, it is estimated that even Yang Kang will not be able to win. It's just that ordinary people just think it's a normal plot. It's a pity that no one can see that these are actually cheating.
Perhaps, you have to ask, what is cheating for? The answer is simple, in order to help the protagonist level up. Why do you upgrade, it's simpler, pick up girls, step on people, pretend to be pigs and eat tigers, and dominate the rivers and lakes...... The guarantee made a large number of readers see the blood boiling.
"This golden finger is actually like this......"
Jiang Feng said it so clearly, Guo Jinzhang finally understood. If you go up step by step, you are not a genius, how can you surpass others? If you don't add some means to the protagonist, how can you let the reader know that the protagonist has great potential. If it's just a scrap of wood, you also want to highlight a little bit of the scrap material. Moreover, it is this shining point that may be the hope of the protagonist's future outbreak.
In a word, the beginning goes straight to the point, and explains the gold finger, and then upgrades all the way around the gold finger.
This is Jiang Feng's summary of the web novel.
Judging from Jiang Feng's experience of reading thousands of online novels, basically, most of the models that can be copied in online novels are like this, and only those divine books of geniuses may be able to surpass this model. Of course, a large number of novels written in this mode have become classics of online novels.
"It's really better to listen to your words than to read for ten years."
When Guo Jinzhang heard Jiang Feng's comments, he was awake for a while, and he suddenly understood.
He's not stupid in the first place, and his writing is good. The reason why the novels I write are so fluttering is that I don't know the writing skills at all. Just write it down all the way according to what you want in your heart. This kind of writing method is a genius if you don't pounce. Normally, a large number of authors are successful by fluttering and fluttering.
The meaning of this sentence is that the more you fail, the more experience you will have. Slowly, in the end, he will be successful.
"Also, you have a shortcoming of Minmei."
This shortcoming is a hard injury, and Jiang Feng has to point it out.
"What are the drawbacks?"
What Jiang Feng said just now, Jiang Feng didn't say that it was fatal, but now that Jiang Feng brought it up, it suddenly made Guo Jinzhang very nervous.
"You're actually breaking off!" Jiang Feng said.
This is a common problem in online novels.
Generally speaking, web novels are updated in a serialized manner. Many people may be able to understand that breaking the change will have a great impact on their grades. However, they don't know that breaking the change is actually a great harm to a novel. There are many platinum gods, just because of the interruption, they have since disappeared from the creation of online literature.
The Tang family is three young, and he thoroughly understands the important surname of the serial. Therefore, the three young men of the Tang family have continued to update, and after the end of the book, before the release of the old book, this process has not been interrupted. Three hundred and sixty-five days a year, kept updated every day, and this gave him the status of the three young gods of the Tang Dynasty.
For newcomers, there is no popularity in the first place. Even if one or two people read your novel, and you stop changing it, the ghost will remember what novel you wrote. Therefore, this break is a big fatal wound in online novels. After many novels were interrupted, they instantly entered the ranks of eunuchs.
Of course, many people will look for this reason, that reason. Sick today, power outage tomorrow, something the day after tomorrow. In short, all kinds of retreats are everywhere and emerge one after another. As for whether this is the case, I'm afraid some are, but most are not. Especially those who issued announcements immediately after the break will definitely continue to write down, and after that, 99% of them are eunuchs.
Later generations are more predictable, and breaking is the precursor of eunuchs.
The current Guo Jinzhang is still quite strong, although it has been interrupted for a few days, but he is still updating intermittently. However, looking at his appearance, it seems that he can't hold on. You know, he can't exchange half a penny for the code word every night every night, how can he keep his passion updated. Especially since his family is not well-off and he needs to earn money to support himself.
"This ......"
Hearing Jiang Feng talk about breaking the change, Guo Jinzhang blushed a little. I wanted to say that I didn't have time or something, but after thinking about it, for the old bookworm in front of me, I was afraid that as soon as I said it, Jiang Feng would be able to debunk his words. So he said embarrassedly: "You also know the situation at home, so I have been working part-time during the winter vacation." I was lazy in those days, and I didn't want to write after I came back from my part-time job. In addition, the grades can't go up, and there is not a single comment on the updated novel, even if you scold me a few words, it's good......"
So, it was interrupted for a few days. Maybe one day it will disappear without a trace, but it is also possible.
"So, there are a lot of reasons, and it's normal for your novel to pounce, and it's unreasonable not to pounce." Jiang Feng said with a smile.
If such a novel can still be very popular, how can you make those diligent brothers who code 10,000 or 20,000 words a day embarrassed.
"It seems that it is not easy to write a good web novel."
After listening to Jiang Feng's conversation, Guo Jinzhang completely understood the operation mode of online novels. It's this one that keeps changing, and I'm afraid that Pa can't do it for many people. I have been interrupted for so much time during my winter vacation, let alone other times. It seems that the idea of continuing the novel while in school is afraid that it will be difficult to maintain.
"That's that, Guo Jinzhang, let's get into the game, I'm waiting for you to do the task together." Xie Qiao on the side said with a smile.
"I'm too lazy to play, I want to think about how I should arrange my time in the future."
Guo Jinzhang still has a hobby for writing, and it seems unlikely that he will give up writing. However, if you want to update it every day, I don't know if you can do it in the future.
"Okay, you hurry up, I can tell you, I won't have much time to play after not playing for a few days."
They are all excellent students who know when to play and when not to play. Like now, before the official class, they can have a dark time. In a few days, when school starts, they won't have time to play.
(To be continued) q
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