Of course, this is just a joke between the brothers in the dormitory.

Subsequently, Jiang Feng asked Guo Jinzhang about what was going on.

It turned out that Guo Jinzhang did not go home during the winter vacation, but stayed at the school to work and study. In my spare time, I heard people talk about the online novels that have been very popular in the past two years, and it is said that they can make a lot of money.

Guo Jinzhang's family background is not good, and he has always wanted to make money, and when he heard someone say this, he was moved. When he returned to the dormitory after work, he went to the Internet to take a look, and immediately felt good, and then took the time to code up the words himself.

As an online author, Guo Jinzhang, although he has suffered a small setback in his creation, he has fully possessed the perseverance that an online author should have. Like this kind of shameless spirit, that is the basic skill of an online novel writer, Jiang Feng is not as good as him.

"Guo Jinzhang, I actually like to read online novels. Tonight, I'll read your magnum opus. ”

Jiang Feng was very surprised, Capital University also has a signed author. Jiang Feng sighed, but thinking about it, even at the starting point of his previous life, there were a large number of students from prestigious schools who continued to create at the starting point. Like the "Wild Fox Under the Tree" who wrote "Sou Shen Ji", he is a genius at Capital University.

"No problem, I'm sure you'll be my first fan." Guo Jinzhang said with a big grin. "Come, come, Jiang Feng, I'll send you a link, you can take a look."

Guo Jinzhang began to write novels after the winter vacation. It's only been written for more than a month, and it doesn't have much popularity. made Guo Jinzhang depressed and sighed that his life was not at the right time. What I wrote by myself is simply earth-shattering, why is no one reading it. In fact, you only need to take a few more looks patiently, and you can find that this book of mine is really a strange book.

This is completely Guo Jinzhang's own judgment.

"Win the sky"!

Such an arrogant name, it stands to reason that such a novel name will definitely become popular as soon as it is launched. Jiang Feng was an old bird who had been mixed with the starting point for many years in his previous life, and he had basically read all the books with good starting points, how could he not know the important surname of a good name, a good name like this would have been robbed of it a few years later. If you steal a good name, it would be maddening to write a good one.

"Hey, I thought about it for three days and three nights."

Hearing Jiang Feng pronounce this name, Guo Jinzhang felt a little proud.

"Well, in terms of names, a good name. However, the text has not yet been decided. Jiang Feng said.

There are too many people selling dog meat at the starting point, and Jiang Feng also knows that if no one reads the novel at the starting point, it is not that the editor does not recommend it to you, nor that the reader has no vision, it is not a book at all. Or, it can't be said that the book is not good, it is not in line with the reader's taste.

"A weak boy, oppressed, finally stood at the top of the fairy world......"

This is the introduction of the book.

Really, the profile is a failure.

In order to guide Guo Jinzhang, Jiang Feng said directly: "Guo Jinzhang, your introduction is too simple. Do you think that this short sentence will attract readers? No, no, no, there are more starting points for a profile like this. A lot of novels are about a weak teenager, and then, he finally became the No1 in this world. That is, you wrote a nonsense sentence on the introduction! ”

"Ah, I see." Guo Jinzhang listened to Jiang Feng and thought about it, and for a while, he was enlightened.

"Thank you Jiang Feng, please point me down." Although Guo Jinzhang is very self-assured, he is not the kind of person who can't listen to opinions, especially in the last semester, he was impressed by Guo Jinzhang's Jiang Feng.

"Okay, I'll read the first three chapters of your novel first, if the first three chapters are not written, you will basically be finished."

In modern society, there are many books. Unlike when I was a child, in addition to textbooks, there were only a few miscellaneous books. Therefore, the post-80s generation has generally read Jin Yong's novels. But for the post-90s, I'm afraid they have only heard of Jin Yong's name. As for those who have seen it, there are very few. At this time, for online novels, it is necessary to keep pace with the times and grasp the reader's taste in order to write a popular book.

Therefore, the first three chapters of a novel are particularly important. There are a lot of online novels at the starting point, and if you haven't explained the background of a novel in the first three chapters, and you are still there in ambush, it is estimated that the readers have already run out. According to Jiang Feng's understanding, Guo Jinzhang's writing is okay, and some of the compositions he usually writes are worthy of the word "Jinzhang" in his name. Jiang Feng estimated that Guo Jinzhang did not master the specific writing method.

Clicking into the novel page, Jiang Feng first looked at the first three chapters of the novel.

About five minutes later, Jiang Feng had finished reading.

This is a fairy tale, Jiang Feng can be sure. However, in the first three chapters, the protagonist has been struggling with the rags of the 21st century. Jiang Feng looked at the table of contents and found that the protagonist didn't hang up until chapter 10, and then traveled to a strange world of Xianxia.

In order to understand the Xianxia world written by Guo Jinzhang in detail, Jiang Feng jumped directly to Chapter 10.

After reading some more content, Jiang Feng finally understood why the novel written by Guo Jinzhang fluttered.

"Guo Jinzhang, with my skills in reading novels for more than ten years, even if you write this novel again, it may not be popular." Jiang Feng said unceremoniously.

"Oh, no." Guo Jinzhang thought that Jiang Feng would appreciate his novels very much, but he didn't expect that Jiang Feng had the same vision as Xie Qiao, Wade and Xu Deliang.

"See, Xiao Guo, Xiao Guo, it's not just us who said that your novel is not good."

At this time, Xie Qiao, Wade, and Xu Deliang were playing games on the side, and after hearing Jiang Feng finish speaking, they made a fool of themselves on the side.

"However, your writing is okay, and your storytelling ability is also good, with a little modification, you may be able to write a red book." Jiang Feng said again.

"Really?" Although Jiang Feng is not the author, Guo Jinzhang heard that Jiang Feng had just analyzed the Tao, and seemed to know a lot about online novels, and then hurriedly asked for advice.

"Of course it's true." Jiang Feng affirmed.

In fact, most novels in the world have certain skills, whether they are online novels or physical novels. Perhaps for those who are relatively high in art, they focus not on the art of fiction, but on the dissemination of culture. Obviously, most of the novels now do not meet this standard. As an ordinary person, you don't need to aspire to that height.

Although Jiang Feng didn't write novels on the Internet, in his previous life, as an otaku, the novels he read were counted in hundreds. With such a wide range of vision, as well as his current knowledge, he naturally knows a lot about the routines of novels. In fact, the writing skills of novels have been passed down to a lot in later generations. Like the nine-line writing, the routine of determining life and death in the first three chapters has been widely circulated. As long as you study carefully, you can generally achieve a good result in the online novel market.

Looking at Guo Jinzhang's humble appearance of seeking advice, Jiang Feng did not hide his selfishness, and said to Guo Jinzhang his opinion: "First of all, you can't do this text. After you start the tenth chapter, you will enter the main topic, that is, you will start to enter the world of Xianxia. So, is the content of the first ten chapters nonsense? ”

Seeing that Guo Jinzhang was about to refute, Jiang Feng waved his hand, motioned for him to finish, and then continued: "Of course, you will say that you are explaining the story of your previous life to increase the sense of substitution. However, in fact, the previous life had little to do with the Xianxia world. You can just spend a few hundred words on the introduction, but what about you? You actually spent 30,000 words! So nostalgic for your past life, why are you still traveling. As a reader, when faced with dozens of novels in front of me, I definitely choose the one that will attract me at first glance. But yours is too grinding. Maybe, even if someone clicks on the name of your novel, it is estimated that after reading two or three chapters, it will be flashy. ”

"It makes sense, I originally thought that the things of the past life would be more clear, and after the crossing, the reader would be able to understand the protagonist's surname more clearly. Listening to you say this, I can completely simplify the content of the first 30,000 words to 300. ”

Guo Jinzhang is a smart person, otherwise, how could he be admitted to one of the top universities in the country like Capital University. In the face of Jiang Feng's guidance, with only a little explanation, Guo Jinzhang already understood.

"This is a big taboo in online novels, don't write something irrelevant at the beginning, or bury any foreshadowing. Because for online novels, to put it bluntly, it is similar to the fast food in the novel, do you still care about its cooking skills when you eat fast food? No way? It's the same for online novels, everyone is watching and playing, killing their spare time or something, how can they be in the mood to think too much? Jiang Feng said.

Like Jin Yong, a book with more than 100,000 words at the beginning that has not yet entered the protagonist may be placed in the online novel market, and it will also have to be put into trouble.

Of course, whether Jin Yong's novels will be published in the online literature market is also a debate. Some people bluntly said that they must be pounced, and with the impetuous mood of current Internet readers, I am afraid that Jin Yong's novel would have been thrown into the Pacific Ocean long ago. However, some people think that even if Jin Yong's novel does not enter the main topic at the beginning, it should be able to make up for it if his pen is too powerful.

The two sides quarreled back and forth, but neither persuaded anyone. After all, such a thing cannot happen, and no one has any evidence to show it.

However, both parties actually have one thing in common, that is, when writing the beginning of the online novel, they must not write nonsense, and should go directly to the topic. You are a fairyman, directly a fairyman. You are reborn in the city, and you will be reborn in the first chapter. If you are still arranged, how should the protagonist be reborn, whether he jumped off the building, or was hit by someone, or was dumped, he was depressed for a few days, and then he talked about thousands of words, and then he was reborn, and it is estimated that the reader will scold you to death.

(To be continued) q

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